Bla bla's sprites

[Gespenst]

Good, but you should try to make various pose instead just standing, I mean it, because later youw ill ger stuck at other like punhc or falling, well some people do, like me
maybe instead making lots of hair waves or how these things are called, try to make more simple because sprite body shading is not so detailed.
Mundvol hair fix, bit not match with whole sprite, because it has dar and much more ligher shades, unlike whole body.
But still good.
+ was not afraid of live show
that was my opinion, if I offended you, please pm me and we will make it clear.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Good, but you should try to make various pose instead just standing, I mean it, because later you will get stuck at other like punch or falling, well some people do, like me

Yeah, i guess i should. As i've already mentioned i also like to make sheets of some sprite i make. Here's an example:
- It was a sprite that i made than mundvoll fixed it a little. Gosh, he always fixes my sprites.
But i use bases for every character i make. For the next sprite i'll make a new pose or if i have time i'll make a whole animation like the one in my profile.

maybe instead making lots of hair waves or how these things are called, try to make more simple because sprite body shading is not so detailed.
Mundvoll hair fix, bit not match with whole sprite, because it has dark and much more ligher shades, unlike whole body.
But still good.

The hair was a real problem. I did what i could. As for the body shading, you'll see in my past sprites that i usually keep body shading simple. He also didn't have much space for it. :P

+ was not afraid of live show

I acctually was thinking if i could go with it. It went pretty good in my opinion.

that was my opinion, if I offended you, please pm me and we will make it clear.

Haha, no why would i be offended. I am posting the sprite in order to get critiques and eventually improve.
Thanks for the comment.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Did another sprite. My first girl sprite.
- Belle
I kinda like the non-shaded hair more. I also think the legs ended up pretty not good.
It's a character from Urban Rivals again. :P

EDIT: Yeah, i know i double posted. :P

[qwertz143]

its good, legs are fine
left side of shirt (my left) needs to be lengthened a little as it looks like theres a little flab there
also the right eye (my right) could do with a little white.
overall good

[Gespenst]

work on hair, because you making it look bad

[Bla bla bla 44]

Here's a new sprite i did yesterday:


Also I'm streaming right now.
http://www.livestream.com/blablabla44

EDIT:The outcome:
- first
- with tail
- more contrast
- with tail and contrast
Which one is the best. Btw this is boy Charizard for the anime spriting contest .

[Marko pro]

1. sprite, you still must work on hair.. everything else seems to be fine
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Third one is the best one.. but if you are able fix his left arm, his shading makes him too fat or its too fat already in base, i dont know ?
maybe, draw it extended/longer ?

[Gespenst]

maybe just try pokemon instead human which not looks as if he would be pokemon

[Bla bla bla 44]

@EXG9: It's still a LF2 contest. I like human more. :P
Will fix that sprite tomorrow. Now i made a new sprite:

Put a lot more effort in this sprite. Used a new base, had lots of references, used three colour shading on some places and spent more time on it. Hope you like.

[Marko pro]

Absolutely outstanding!!

Proportion is great
I would litlle bit change shading on the hood and thats all..

Best sprite from you!!

Put a lot more effort in this sprite.

We noticed that!