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Phil's mading spriteness
Everything is great, i would suggest you to add details into sprite no matter on original.
Try different pose and avoid using background!

Skin is lack of contrast, well if you make revamp sprite you dont have to choose same color, mean same hue of green, blue, whatever.. cuze those old sprite dont have to be awesome. Mybe it alrady has problem with contrast and you just forward to new sprite.
in genaral i would preffer more darker hue of colors, this looks to childish, no offensive

keep it up i want to see more of you ;)
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collab with mundvoll.. if you wanna see me work
go here http://www.livestream.com/philsspritingchannel :P
(for those really interested its best to have both channels open, we switch from time to time)


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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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@Prince_Freeza: I have done my homework, what is my grade on it? :D
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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WTF i totally LOVE it but pleaseeeeee change the blue shirt
OMG man i really liked the pose the hair the pants the colors :OOO
i liked everything keep this style up dude
but srsly change the blue shirt it dosent fit the style
just make it simple 2 values of blue and put the basic shape of the muscles, nothing more!
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^ easily fixed, thanks to layers :D
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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i would say also take that thick dark blue line at the upper part of the shirt and make it tiny so we hardly see it
take the light blue over this big dark blue
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awesome sprite man, definitly the best from you till now ;)

for critic, i agree with Dh, the only thing which could be changed is the shirt shading imo.
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it's nice :o
the bright hair and shine eyes make his skin look darker :o
his chest is so lowly lowly
because his shirt show a lot of his chest so it's a common mistake :o
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sorry 4 my bad eng
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his muscles not suppose to be so clearly seen while he is in that outfit.
look
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(05-21-2013, 09:35 PM)mundvoll_ Wrote:  for critic, i agree with Dh, the only thing which could be changed is the shirt shading imo.
+ increased contrast in orange colored garments.

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