Hari's scribbles

[Gespenst]

Looks nice
colors are fine, well atleats my phone shows it
I think his shoulders are to high or his arms could be bit longer.
Overall you did a great job

[YinYin]

Jason, character from old Marti's game called "Fight".
I'd be grateful for cc.

What the ...
He's the final boss of that game - don't draw him like a regular little fighter.

He needs to be at least as buff as Celsius, Magnus or even Julian.

[The Hari]

Thanks a lot guys.

Jason v2
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[The Hari]

Again tried to get as close to lf style as I can, but this time in original size.
Also once again take reference from old Marti's works. It's Leo from his flash game.

Is it more LF-ish than Jason? ^^

[Gespenst]

hey its leo )) I played this game. on a first stage. there was 1 enemy left. I died

[YinYin]

Yes.
Could use more colour contrast on the hair and more shape contrast around waist and hands/arms (he's just a blob there while his posture in the game is pretty pronounced).

[Gespenst]

also, sprite looks very blurry and its hard too see a contrast between some colors because of that

[The Hari]

Why finding a good design for LF character is so damn hard?
I want to (try) make a character, but can't find out anything good. Here is the only one complete attempt, all the others got abandoned before finish.

[The Lost Global Mod]

looks totally like a davis who grew up in a jungle... I LOVE IT!!!


critic though:
you could add maybe a bit of muscles.

[Gespenst]

I would make something like this.

bit hair edit, face, and muscles