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Hari's scribbles
Looks nice:)
colors are fine, well atleats my phone shows it:)
I think his shoulders are to high or his arms could be bit longer.
Overall you did a great job:)
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Thanks given by: The Hari
(07-19-2013, 09:53 PM)The Hari Wrote:  Jason, character from old Marti's game called "Fight".
I'd be grateful for cc.
What the ...
He's the final boss of that game - don't draw him like a regular little fighter.

He needs to be at least as buff as Celsius, Magnus or even Julian.

[Image: or5yef.png] [Image: celsius_by_yinyin_falcon-d5r155s.gif] [Image: breathing.gif] [Image: JULIAN234.gif]
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Thanks a lot guys.

Jason v2
[Image: 352ro6u.png] > [Image: 126b3ud.png]

[Image: 2jb0952.png] > [Image: 2n0vdwp.png]

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Thanks given by: betitngoan
Again tried to get as close to lf style as I can, but this time in original size.
Also once again take reference from old Marti's works. It's Leo from his flash game.
[Image: ettfmv.png]
Is it more LF-ish than Jason? ^^

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Thanks given by: Gespenst , NewToTheEra
hey its leo :))) I played this game. on a first stage. there was 1 enemy left. I died
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Yes.
Could use more colour contrast on the hair and more shape contrast around waist and hands/arms (he's just a blob there while his posture in the game is pretty pronounced).
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also, sprite looks very blurry and its hard too see a contrast between some colors because of that
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Why finding a good design for LF character is so damn hard?
I want to (try) make a character, but can't find out anything good. Here is the only one complete attempt, all the others got abandoned before finish.
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Thanks given by: Dragon5
looks totally like a davis who grew up in a jungle... I LOVE IT!!!


critic though:
you could add maybe a bit of muscles.
[sig placeholder until my new sig is finished]
should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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Thanks given by: The Hari
I would make something like this.
[Image: VyieqJ4.png]
bit hair edit, face, and muscles
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