Bla bla's sprites

[Monolanier]

Errr, actualy 316x316 is 4x size... Nvm
try to make hair more natural, try to look at your hair fro that.
It has those lines which connects
look at previous sprite hair, its much nicer.

[Bla bla bla 44]

The hair is my enemy. :P
Here's a new facepic I made:

- Less hair shading
They should resemble this sprite:
What needs fixing?

[8obis]

That's actually pretty good. His face might be a little too low and the outlines are kinda too sketchy, but other than that it's really good.

[The Hari]

Add outlines to ear and also to clothes to point out folds.
Make his eyes smaller. These are to wide. Right eye occlude an eyebrow and left one stick out too much, there should some visble skin between outline and eye.
Eyebrows should be thicker (and above both eyes, right one is completely invisible). Check out original facepics and try to copy them.
I'd also increase contrast of skin, especially on neck, color there should be much darker.
Oh and make line of his lips thinner.

Nice job anyway, wait for this character fixed version.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Tried fixing few things:

That's actually pretty good. His face might be a little too low and the outlines are kinda too sketchy, but other than that it's really good.

Yeah, i tend to do that. :P

Add outlines to ear and also to clothes to point out folds.

Check. However I didn't do much to his scarf.

Make his eyes smaller. These are to wide. Right eye occlude an eyebrow and left one stick out too much, there should some visble skin between outline and eye.

Tried making his left eye smaller and added eyebrow at the right one.

Eyebrows should be thicker (and above both eyes, right one is completely invisible). Check out original facepics and try to copy them.

Made them as thick as i can.

I'd also increase contrast of skin, especially on neck, color there should be much darker.

I added slightly darker colour on his neck that is hardly visible.

Oh and make line of his lips thinner.

Check.

EDIT: V Those over his nose? They are supposed to be his muscles making that angry face. :P

[empirefantasy]

what are these black lines try to fix that. black lines even goes out of position.

other things looks to be nice

[Monolanier]

He blabla?
Can I ask you something?
would you give me permission to make face pic which would be based on yours?
Also I would make like step by step.

[Bla bla bla 44]

I got my hands on a Photoshop CS6 so i had to try spriting on it. Here's a new sprite:

- No scarf
Which one is better?

BTW i made a sprite before that one that sucked:

And i found an old sprite i didn't post here that i made for a contest but changed my entry:

[Monolanier]

there is something missing between lower body and upper body



scarf, looks weird, its like these dress up games. maybe ad some shadow on sprite body where scarf covers light?


probobly just old problem with abs and hair.



cant say

[Bla bla bla 44]

New sprite incoming:

- with sword