Hari's scribbles

[The Hari]

Why finding a good design for LF character is so damn hard?
I want to (try) make a character, but can't find out anything good. Here is the only one complete attempt, all the others got abandoned before finish.

[The Lost Global Mod]

looks totally like a davis who grew up in a jungle... I LOVE IT!!!


critic though:
you could add maybe a bit of muscles.

[Monolanier]

I would make something like this.

bit hair edit, face, and muscles

[The Hari]

At first he had muscle similar to Deep, but I resigned from them to have less work with spriting. For hair I took an isnspiration from this LF1 head

[Monolanier]

maybe try to ad muscles like I showed in my edit.
thats not much of a work

[Ariel]

consider making more difference between the full-body outfit and the vest that is on it
choose one of them to have a main color and make it saturated
chose the second one to have that main color but take it bit to the color near him (ex: near red is orange/pink) make the second color bit less saturated than the main color also if u would make the second color darker than the main color that would be even better
something like that:

[Monolanier]

Hari, you know why I like yours style?

because you realy can do lf2 style
with no claiming

[The Hari]

Nice to hear that^ I'm trying.

I've posted this sprite, just to show off and wanted to do something new, but with this feedback, I couldn't leave it.
So I remade sprite in original size:

For now I'm going to post any progress in this thread, untill all basic sprites will be ready. Of course I won't spam with every single animation, but only when I have some more things to show.

[Monolanier]

by any chance, are u using layers?.
if you need some help on standing animation. you can always pm me.
but if its on layers. please send all layers in different png format pictures with invisible background (forgot that word) Of course, if you will need it.

[The Hari]

Would be easier to just tell me what is wrong with this one.