"Pro" video review?

[Shtrudel]

As I said in "getting more people to know this game", I want to make a video reviewing it. The problem is, I don't know video editing and my current pc is incapable of doing so.
So I thought to make this thing into a forum project, getting help from anyone who can.

I already started with the script, LGR (Lazy Game Reviews) style, but I feel I should remake it. Here it is:

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Little Fighter 2, that free download game that everyone have/has (?) played it at least onces in their life. Created by Marti Wong and Starsky Wong [which are not actually brothers(?)] in 1999 and saw a couple of releases and updates, but I'll get to that later.
So for those who don't know this game for some reason, it's some kind of a "Street Fighter in a Beat-'em-Up", with very unique gameplay. While many other beat-'em up had mostly slow melee fights, Little Fighter provided much faster gameplay. I'll get into the gameplay in depth later, but first I want to cover the versions of the game:
The first version was 1.45, released in July 2001, with only the 10 heroes and only versus mode.
The second was version 1.7, released in April 2002. It included new game modes, with the most notable one being the Stage Mode. It had only 4 stages and not-so-hidden characters that appeared in that mode.
The thirst version and the most notable one is version 1.9, released in September of the same year and again in September 2005 with fixed graphics for 32 bit systems. It was the first complete version of the game with redesined Avatars and adding the last Stage in Stage mode.

What I think the problem is, I should cover the basic features in version 1.9 before I cover the versions of the game.

Is there anyone willing to help me with it? It can be scripting, editing or recording gameplay. I would've recorded it by myself, but I can't record sound directly from the pc for some reason.
Also you can just give suggestions what I should cover in the review.

Edit: Also, my accent is pretty good, but my voice is horrible. If anyone who has radiophonic voice wills to contribute his voice to the project, that would be awesome

[Lauli]

Yea, so uhm. Like I said in my PM, I can do video editing and commentary, just no recording.
I'm in.

[Ramond]

Spoiler (Click to View)

Little Fighter 2, that free download game that everyone have/has (?) played it at least onces in their life. Created by Marti Wong and Starsky Wong [which are not actually brothers(?)] in 1999 and saw a couple of releases and updates, but I'll get to that later.
So for those who don't know this game for some reason, it's some kind of a "Street Fighter in a Beat-'em-Up", with very unique gameplay. While many other beat-'em up had mostly slow melee fights, Little Fighter provided much faster gameplay. I'll get into the gameplay in depth later, but first I want to cover the versions of the game:
The first version was 1.45, released in July 2001, with only the 10 heroes and only versus mode.
The second was version 1.7, released in April 2002. It included new game modes, with the most notable one being the Stage Mode. It had only 4 stages and not-so-hidden characters that appeared in that mode.
The thirst version and the most notable one is version 1.9, released in September of the same year and again in September 2005 with fixed graphics for 32 bit systems. It was the first complete version of the game with redesined Avatars and adding the last Stage in Stage mode.

Hmm, not sure where you got this from, but following Marti's own Progress Timetable, he released many, many more versions than those. See here. (At least I wouldn't refer to them as "first", "second" and "third" version.)

Anyway, I personally wouldn't include any kind of version/release history in a video review, because people wouldn't care (at least not those who aren't already acquainted with the game itself)

[Memento]

Spoiler (Click to View)

Little Fighter 2, that free download game that everyone have/has (?) played it at least onces in their life. Created by Marti Wong and Starsky Wong [which are not actually brothers(?)] in 1999 and saw a couple of releases and updates, but I'll get to that later.
So for those who don't know this game for some reason, it's some kind of a "Street Fighter in a Beat-'em-Up", with very unique gameplay. While many other beat-'em up had mostly slow melee fights, Little Fighter provided much faster gameplay. I'll get into the gameplay in depth later, but first I want to cover the versions of the game:
The first version was 1.45, released in July 2001, with only the 10 heroes and only versus mode.
The second was version 1.7, released in April 2002. It included new game modes, with the most notable one being the Stage Mode. It had only 4 stages and not-so-hidden characters that appeared in that mode.
The thirst version and the most notable one is version 1.9, released in September of the same year and again in September 2005 with fixed graphics for 32 bit systems. It was the first complete version of the game with redesined Avatars and adding the last Stage in Stage mode.

Hmm, not sure where you got this from, but following Marti's own Progress Timetable, he released many, many more versions than those. See here. (At least I wouldn't refer to them as "first", "second" and "third" version.)

Anyway, I personally wouldn't include any kind of version/release history in a video review, because people wouldn't care (at least not those who aren't already acquainted with the game itself)

Exactly what I was going to say. I'd personally leave it out, who cares about any version but the best one?

[Shtrudel]

I can say something like "Most of you probably remember version 1.9 from 2002, which was the first complete release of the game, but they also released version 2.0 in 2008, to celebrate the game's 10th anniversary, and that's the version I'll focus on this review. And yes, I'll note when something new is featured in this one."
Tommorow I'll rewrite the script and try to add more content.