Ariel's WIP paintings

[MnM]

I think the mouth is wrongly placed and it's completely empty :P. Add some teeth and tongue to give it a solid look.

I hope something like this should work:


@Ninja post: the positioning could be corrected. Maybe it's just that the mouth is devoid of any teeth to complement the structure of the face.

edit: Also the edges are way too sharp. Smooth it out so it gives a natural feel .

[Monolanier]

DOn't know MnM, but isn't she smiling and which causes mouth to go against the rules?

Also, fixing botox in the lips, itmight be not fixable because of her whole face

[Ariel]

alright i think iv got it right this time
btw, should the chin go lill bit down?

[Jahvansi]

looks way better to me!

[Marko]

Looks like "duckface" to me... is it on purpose?

[MnM]

Now, that I notice, the pupils are big. Also, since the light is coming from left top, the cornea should shine on left top(bowl facing upside down) and the iris should be lit on right bottom (think of a bowl). Chin might be a little small but it's not that noticeable.

[Ariel]

Spoiler (Click to View)

[Ariel]

sketch (Click to View)

head - first colors (Click to View)

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[Rhino.Freak]

I know it's your own style and take on the character but the face does look a bit off.
Other than that I like the colors and shading! Can't wait to see a more refined version (if there will be one)

[Ariel]

just worked on that ^_^



im trying to catch the same feeling as hit have on this scene