[Character] My first character!

[Jed37]

hm
looks a bit weird
the face doesnt fits with the rest
photofiltre is your friend
_{believe me}
Btw:
Doesnt it look a bit unreal if the hair doesnt fall over the face
it's too strange

:confused: The face is Firen's original face, and the hair is Louis's original hair XD
Still, thanks for the advice.

[Silverthorn]

Yea, to add a comment from my side: the character needs some hair over his forehead, at the moment it looks a little strange. Also, you might want to put the armor on both shoulders at least. One shoulder covered, and one not, that isn't really a good protection, two shoulders also creates some sense of symmetry. In addition, if you flip the sprite (which will occur when you walk with the char in a certain direction), the armor "jumps" from one shoulder to another...

[Jed37]

Yea, to add a comment from my side: the character needs some hair over his forehead, at the moment it looks a little strange. Also, you might want to put the armor on both shoulders at least. One shoulder covered, and one not, that isn't really a good protection, two shoulders also creates some sense of symmetry. In addition, if you flip the sprite (which will occur when you walk with the char in a certain direction), the armor "jumps" from one shoulder to another...

All right, I'll fix that. ty for the advice

[Gad]

It's little weird and name is kinda.... familiar? Make something more original and change face a bit. It's too "firenous"

[Hukko]

Yes, are you fixing the sprites errors?

[Guigs]

A little hair on the forehead would make it REAL better.

The first thing when you do a character is to not have lazyness.
Good Luck.

[Zhyhm.Z]

Hm.. The hair, i think it should be bigger if you want louis hair.
And we can still see the "red thingy" under the armor (this make it looks unreal, like there's a piece of metal hung on his shoulder)

[Jed37]

Ok, I know it took a while, but I finally got to work and finished the character. I decided to name him Firex, and fix some of the problems. Also, i've completely changed his movelist. Thanks, everyone, for being patient, and I hope you like it.

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[Alblaka]

This is more a sprite then a project. Besides you want to give him some nice moves etc ^^

Btw: How can you see the entire bmp's? The image link shows a nice white window >.> At least for me...

[Jed37]

I, uhh, didn't put in an image link... Oh, unless you're talking about the one on the first page, in which case I don't know what the problem is... I can see it.