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#81
It resembles me of female character, probably because of his tinny waist and feminine eyes. I guess you could work on that a bit more
Awesome anyway, you are very creative person. Keep it coming.
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#82
Made an Idle animation
Edit: fixed the link :O
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#83
Can you fix the link? i can't see it
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#84
omg that's really good :D really like it!

Dat thigh gap tho.
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#85
What a traditional animation style. It looks very lively. I love it!
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#86
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#87
Tried to work more on composition and background
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#88
Interesting piece! If you don't mind, I do have a bit of crit in the technical aspects, though.

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The sheets she's throwing up are a nice addition but lack a bit of contrast: they blend in with the background quite easily. You might want to try out tinkering with adding local lights to help counteracting this.

Apart from that, again, nice idea. Keep it up!
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#89
Fanart from Fire Emblem Fates
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#90
I really like the colors and shading you did there but I'm not totally ecstatic on the pose. It could be a bit more dynamic with her legs bent and ready to fight it kinda looks awkward and she is barely holding onto the weapon with her fingers lightly supporting it doesn't make me believe she is ready to fight but just there posing for the camera. i probably wouldn't care if the face was all happy and bubbly but she looks super serious so i think it would make sense to have that mimicked in the rest of the body by giving her that dynamic pose as well as thoroughly grabbing onto her weapon by the palm of her hand instead of just lightly grazing it against her fingers. on top of that you gave her abs which tells me she is serious about working out and trying to look strong the pose doesn't match the rest of the vibe. either make it so that she doesn't look serious/fit or she looks serious and tough, i'd go for that latter option. fix that and you're golden mate
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