My sprites (chase123)

[chase123]

UPDATE 1 (Click to View)

UPDATE 2 (Click to View)

Wang:


Reaper:


Alchez:


Alex:


Wright:


Leo:


Dranca:


Hydro by "Ak.":


Lee:


Tigro:


Kaito:


Alen:


Zale:


Garet:


Pepsiman:


Roy:


Zeek:

[~Dome~]

Well, sry to say but they look bad.

You should improve these things:

1.

- Hair look like an explosion
- black pixels
- much from firen
- whats the orange thing on his t-shirt?
- nearly no shading

2.

- not 100% from scratch, I can see parts of Jack, Henry and Davis
- T-shirt looks wierd
- All in one he looks a bit small
- too simple shading

3.

- no shading
- looks like he is dancing xD
- T-shirt too big / pants too small
- his head is in an false perspective
- colors look a bit wierd

[zero_legends]

You've got talent only a newcomer like u can have what it takes to show his sprite drawings that aren't well masterd. Here are what u need:


1st pic:

- No shading ( same with dome ).

- Hair is funky. Does he have an afro?

- Wierd pixels and poor colouring.

2nd pic:

- Same again, no shadings.

- Fix jacket shading, brightness, texture and design.

3rd pic:

- Legs are in a poor pose and in wierd direction.

- Poor colouring.

- Funky pose ( same with dome ).

- Completley flat with no human like shape of body.

- Too much shirt and too little pants ( same with dome again! ).

Hard and sorry to say dude but u gotta fix alot of stuff. Keep trying. U have talent. With a little practice your hard work will come out.

[chase123]

Noooooooooooooo i didn't knew that i was that bad and yes the first one has the hairstyle Afro.

[lf2TimmE1]

and why are u making a new thread for this?

[KaywonnJuto]

Actually the 2nd one isn't all that bad...
The one in scratch sucks even if you didn't 100% scratch all of of us can do better than that...
1st as well...
Work on the 2nd if you want...
It reminds me of Davis & Dennis...
Work on it he has a nice face but change the clothes a bit, keep the color if you want...
I'm just saying...

[zero_legends]

First of all nobody can make anything perfect u know. Second of all: PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT! Make sense? I saw with my own eyes 2 guys who drawed like they're babies and after one full year of practice they drawed like proffesionalls. Practice is what counts. And u aren't that bad of how your explaining your self. Keep it-up dude and draw like others do.

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lf2TimmE1 Wrote:
and why are u making a new thread for this? -.-

To show his sprites he has to make a new thread. What? U want him to post in somebody elses thread to show his artwork?

[Yinseko]

em...second sprite...is Davis? O__o

[KaywonnJuto]

Sorry, my answer was a bit rude, don't you think...?
And yeah, For a first timer it's good (or ok in the least )
And yeah It does look somewhat-like Davis, but a chubby version of him, I guess?
Right?

[Gad]

Whoah!!! I love the third sprite! It's just incredible!!! O.O

You should wait 2 years and then keep working with sprites.