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[Lord Anu]

-I must notice something in this novel... What when characters starts to die? I mean...
I can't write that Daymio, or Reaper, or Phil followed me in some d@mn battle and they died there. I can only make my char to die right? Or if some of you wrote that my char died in battle. If some of you guys want that my character die in battle... Then make his battle be proud and magnificent by fighting with some big evil boss.

-Other thing I wanted to say... I think our novel would be much better and interested to peoples if we could create a map of our world. If somebody want me to make a map for our novel then tell me. It won't be easy and quick, but I can do it. I just need to know our world a little better.

[Evil Sonidow]

You can't kill anybody's char except your own. You want to do the world map, do it. Don't wait for the others.

[Lord Anu]

Oh and sorry if I'm boring, but I must ask. What is the name of capital city?
You must give me the names of cities where you've been, so I can make a map...

[Evil Sonidow]

I think Daymio named the capital city "Quarzt". Also, make names up, and if needed we'll retcon. Don't worry too much.

I'm assuming this is the official Forum Novel discussion thread, so I'll post here anyway. I agree that my prologue to the story sucked hard, but I suppose it's fair to say that my entry to the forum novel has a lot more to add than Reaper/Phil's. I'm saying that because when you read them, you'll see that mine completely contradicts his, but I think it's going to add a lot more depth to the story. I wanna know what you guys think.

[The Lost Global Mod]

erm.. anubis you screwed it slightly.. no.. in fact you screwed it totally...
try to let the others char you involve rather neutral and don't let them appear weak, helpless and stupid at the same time..

[Evil Sonidow]

Tip for everybody that's writing: please, try to picture the others right. We are the heroes of the story, and mostly are around the same level (not to mention some have similar powers). Also, if you have an idea for the plot, post it (learned the hard way) and ask the others. Just because you don't like someone doesn't make mean you should make him look weak/stupid/helpless. Try to enforce the differences in traits between you, but don't try to make your own char look better by degrading the others. That won't be tolerated.

I'll tell my idea even though Anubis has already screwed it up: everybody meets in the destroyed city without really knowing each other but realizing they were too late. They begin to know each other and search for who's behind all this. That's the general thing, but Anubis decided to promptly give his own story which, in my opinion, resembles more his story than ours. Nevertheless, it's done now and we gotta move on.

[Zabobula]

Replying to Lord Anubis's statements: "Seems that you guys gone to far... Capital city Quarzt is already destroyed? How that happened? Ok I will write now how the Quarzt has been destroyed and who arrived there on time when demons attacked... Zab you forget to put us who were in city Quartz already, but ok."

It's not that bad. It's good that someone like you explained how it got destroyed. It's helps with past and present. And about me forgetting to put whoever was in the city, that's not my job. I'm to tell the story from my perspective. Noir and Daymio is who I encountered when I reached the city.

[Evil Sonidow]

It wasn't supposed to be already explained how it was destroyed. It was a cliffhanger. But I agree with Zab, we're not responsible for all the other chars. You might control a bit who you are with in the moment, but that's it.

I doubt people will listen, but I'll try anyway. You should get more variety in the chars. Archers, mages, rogues, whatever you want, but all we've got is a bunch of repeated melees. Almost everybody can only punch and kick.

[betitngoan]

WILL.....YOU.....CHANGE......YOUR......CHAR......?

ok, you want to change it. I don't care . What ever

i know , i Know : " no one is number 1 , no one is number 1 "

[Evil Sonidow]

It's official: you have no idea whatsoever of what we're telling you.