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[Ascor]

someone join the forest

[Reaper]

if someone would write how we get out of town, we could come into the forest.
Btw: You can also write how you come to the town and see us leaving it. Or you could meet simoneon and Long. Don't wait for us to do something. Do it yourself!
And I think this is slowly driving into spam. We have more (often pointless) discussion than writing. I can't write again, someone out of you has to.

[Evil Sonidow]

Simoneon and Long are somewhere in a mountain, don't think we'll be encountering them anytime soon. As of hacker, I'll have us pass in the forest and meet him. So wait a bit and I'll write my part.

[Ascor]

Kay :P
would be cool
but tell me if we are fighting or if you'll just recognize us and do something

[Daymio]

ummm.... story is going great... but.... i think there is too many good guys... i mean... i am only bad guy (plus demons but they don't count)
maybe somebody could be bad too.... like.... i don't know... phil ( cuz he is vampire and i like his char) or Long...

[Evil Sonidow]

I have a suggestion for who could become a bad guy during the novel, but I'll keep it quiet and talk to him first.

[Lord Anu]

I made a map... I hope it looks good enough. But I need to improve it so I need some answers and feedback...
Btw I don't know where I will put the forest we are going(we are going to meet LF2-Hacker and Harold right?)... So maybe I could put the forest on south, but I don't know why we are going on south! Is there some city, greater than city Quarzt, that we can stay in and have a war there?
And I don't know how this village is called, village near the mountain Arytow...

[no one]

The village near the mount Arytow has no name, call it whatever you want or just leave it blank.

And can you enlarge the map a bit? I have bad eye sight.

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And maybe we'll need some sort of sum up story to keep a track on where's everybody, who's doing what and stuff like that. It's really hard to keep a track on if you forgot something and have to go through every post to find the right details.

[Reaper]

Looks quite interesting. Just two things:
- Is it maybe possible to make a transition for example between forest and ice? I know its not easy, but if you can do that its good.
- If the city in the east is for the demons I would leave it out because we don't know where we will go. or where the demons come from.

Oh and as Quarzt is the capital there is no bigger city I guess. And I don't want to fight in a big town again, maybe later. We will see where we go when the next person posts. It is in your hands, but I would recomment that we either go to the point where the demons first appeared( according to the backstory some of them did) or to someone who knows about them.( Maybe Noir gives us a task?) I think we shouldn't go to some kind of castle where the evil king is. It would be too short.
But as I said, first who writes can decide some of these things.
Btw: Harold and Hacker could also be in the forest in the west... Or isn't it a forest?

[Zabobula]

Btw regarding the issue of grammar and punctuality...from now on...If I see enough grammar errors to demotivate reading...then I will personally edit posts for everyone's sake. This of course includes my own without a doubt. :P But don't worry, I wont change your story.