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[Zabobula]

It's obvious where this is headed. We are headed to a sacred castle and those annoying screeching things with black cloaks are gunna stab one of us. Then that person will have a revalation and out of nowhere Smeagle appears.
CoLughO...whTeezRe

But on a more serious note.

This really is turning into a knock-off of the [insert all 3-hour movie titles here] series. So I'm gunna change things in this story ALOT. So much so that...it'll be alot more interesting. Don't worry...no one will die.....at least not yet anyways. But just look out for my post. When it comes...it'll be so hot..all the oceans will not be able to cease its flames. O_o

I hope I've gotten you all's interest.

[no one]

@ES: Sorry, guess I read it too many time.

@Zab: Sound cool. I can't wait to read it

Offtopic:

no one will die.....at least not yet anyways.

Don't you just love my user name? I know I do .

[Reaper]

Its pretty difficult with you and someone else in the forum not to write something with two meanings
@Pi-face:
- if he is made out of the sorrow of humans minds, he is either completely evil or he has some serious conflicts in his mind. Like he is made for bringing sorrow to everybody but tries to be good. Or his whole life is filled with sorrow and he has to bring sorrow to others to get rid of it for a short time. But only having no mercy and not killing innocents is just unlogical.

No overpowered chars.

ultimate at sword fighting, and has many dark forbidden arts.
...
...he will train the heroes but they will not know that he is training them.

do I have to say anything more?
-what is that sentence with the generals about? I don't understand it.

@Zab: Can't wait for it, time to get away from Lotr... I'm really interested in how you will do it.

[Elias]

Okay here is my story char and thanks Reaper for leting me join.

Name: Manji
Age: ?????
Outlooks: [Image: manji_0_10.jpg]
Background story: Manji was said to be the messenger from HELL, other say he is THE DEVIL himself, but nobody knows who he is really is. When the first person saw Manji he asked his name but then Manji looked at his eye's and the person went nuts and said the same sentence in every single language and the sentence was "he the one who will destroy this world and make a new better world." After that people feared him and many heroes tried to kill them but all failed except one hero who made a curse on his sword when fighting Manji, the curse was that he couldn't kill a single soul but the curse could only work if a sacrifices of a human was made which was that hero. So from that day Manji couldn't make what was his mission to change the world. Now Manji needs an army to kill everybody or change the way of people hatred to make wars and deaths of their own kind.
Character: Evil, smart, hates wars, antihero, and quiet.
Know associations: Knows everybody who is still alive.
Special abilities: Can control people if they are weak, fights with his sword but can't kill when he has it, also knows some dark powers like shadow minions or shadow transportation.

Well I changed him a little, also he is not overpowered.

@Reaper: When I meant with the generals I meant could I make bad guys like you know Julian's left and right hand (I think he is the bad guy or no), the left and right hand means his most loyal subjects.

[Zabobula]

So Pi is replacing Chase? W/e

Regarding my post...I'm not completely satisfied yet. There's alot more I want to write but I wanna give people time to write now. So...if ure gunna wright something...do it soon. O_o

Btw off-topic: New LF Empire chapter tomorrow ^^

[Reaper]

I don't know why you aren't satisfied with your post... I think its great The action finally came back.
But I think that Anubis, Alec and Drahcir probably won't go on as fast as we do. It should somehow be balanced, but with you, no one and me we are the much more active group.
@Drahcir: You wrote about both Drahcir and Mailliw while one of them is far away
@Zab: Same with you. Its Mailliw, not drahcir.
@Pi-face: Try to use different connectors than "and" in your story. The text gets much more variety then. Why does Manji hate war by the way?

[Elias]

Well reaper he hates wars because they are pointless and many people die on wars.
Also I'll try to make less "and".

[Zabobula]

Well reaper he hates wars because they are pointless and many people die on wars.
Also I'll try to make less "and".

And yet he's evil?

[Lord Anu]

I wasn't here for 2 days and you guys already screwed up wit the story(with Drahcir and Mailliw)... You are making fun when I made mistake in grammar, but what should I say now?
Anyway that's not what I wanted to say now(you can repair it anyway so it's ok). I wanted to say that I will not be here online for 2 days again, but I will write something while I am away(I just hope that you won't gone to far with story again, cus then I will have to think up something again, but it's ok). I hope that I will be able to get the internet in one of this 2 days when I'm gone so I can post my part of story.
Don't worry guys we won't stay behind with our part of journey in story. I will take care of it(or at least I hope I will)...

[Drahcir]

What do you mean, screwed up the story with Drahcir and Mailliw? If it's the fact that only one ever seems to appear at a time, I agree. Otherwise, mind explaining?