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Pi-Face, mind not hogging the title of Epic Hero? You make the rest of the chars look like fail.
*uses doublepost blocker*
Also, Pi-Face, I also think it's a horrible idea.
One more thing--This is a forum novel, not the LF2 Killing Game. No need to be so freaking competitive.
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(08-26-2009, 09:38 PM)Evil Sonidow Wrote:  The main problem is that you all fail to respect hierarchy. Julian is A LOT stronger than Z is. He MUST respect him or DIE. Worse part is that Julian gives the impression to be a pussy because he lets subordinates treat him like that.

Also, a message for Pi-face and Zab: STOP MAKING YOUR CHARS OVERLY POWERFUL. It's ridiculous.

I think you're reading too deeply into my posts. :P

Just because my character doesn't respect Julian doesn't mean he's stronger than him. My character has his own agenda and doesn't like taking orders from anyone else. It's obvious a deal was made. But what it consisted of is a mystery as of now.
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Well I guess so far isn't what I was planing.
Also I guess I won't written anything for now and Reaper can you keep the score okay.
Also I told Zabobula to close the Forum Novel until we are over with the discussion.
One more thing, in the forum novel there is no main female char, right.
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I'm not closing it unless everyone else agrees. Someone else might have something to write.

EDIT: Do you all want the forum novel thread to be closed to give more time to come up with new ideas?


Btw Kira is the only female char I can recall. But she's not the main. Soo....yeah.... -_-
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(08-27-2009, 04:16 AM)Zabobula Wrote:  Btw Kira is the only female char I can recall. But she's not the main. Soo....yeah.... -_-

Ahhh.

Well I'm gonna say some reasons why I wanted to every main hero go to another world is because this place is small, and I'm not used to small places.
Also to add little bit of char at least 2, and one could be a female. Also in here it's always like this, we have to safe Drachi, oh no demons are attacking, well all of the heroes stuff there is no free time I guess and I'm used to reading stories that not always action after action, but still I like it.(I'm not sure the last sentence had to do for the main people go to another world.)

Also today at the morning I couldn't sleep because I had an idea putting me in the story and Manji will vanish back to his world.

Will edit when I'm done making me as a char.
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ok, I don't have many time, but:
- the map we have of our map is just a part of it, the part we now. Around it there could be other things.
- the army should soon come which could change some things and gives us new material
- Zab is either strong because he has the ring of a warlord or because the evil ghost is in his head. So he has some conflicts which make it ok that he is strong and he is evil which makes it also ok. I guess we need an enemy as strong as that, otherwise its too easy. as long as Manji is completely good, he shouldn't be able to defeat a warlord, even with the help of Noir. But for now its ok.
- If you need a female char, invent one. I guess the army should soon meet us and there are probably quite some female fighters.
- why closing the forum novel? If nobody wants to go on, nobody is writing. If somebody has an idea, he writes.
- @ES: I wasn't thinking about defeating him now. Especially about Z there must happen many things fto end this. and I don't want to end it. But I already think about the ending.
- also @ES: I guess Z is atm intoxicated by his own might. That would be a reason why he talks to Julian like that. Nevertheless you have a point that Julian shouldn't accept that. But he knows that Z wouldn't have a chance against him anyway.
- Have to go off, could have written some crap which I will hate after thinking about it but anyway.
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1anwser: Well I hope we can expend the map 5X bigger because it's so small, for me.
2anwser: Yeah, the army could give as new material but don't think that much.
4anwser: Why dose every main char in this story has to be a fighter, look I'm gonna replace me with Manji, and I'm not that much of a fighter.
We could just have a normal female char, but not a fighter because sick of fighters every time.
5anwser: Well I just suggest we could close it down while we discus this.

Okay I will make me Elias or Pi-Face but his name will be Elias and he will represent me. He will from Earth and can he bring just one electronic a PSP okay that's all.
PSP, strands for PlayStation Portable.
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I just said fighter because I didn't have time.
to the last paragraph: sorry, but what? Elias will represent you, ok, what is with Manji? What do you mean by PSP? "He will earth" is an ellipsis or so by the way :D

Ok, I wrote a new chapter which should change many things. Hope that is ok, but I don't think that you will get a majority for changing the world. I just edited my old post, look into the thread.
I edited my last post in the forum novel, look into it!


Btw: If you want a bigger map, write what else is where! We don't discuss about everything in here.
Oh... I hope it isn't a problem then that the army has already been attacked? But Manji attacks also, so you can
-let him die.
-make him distracting Julian.
-something else
But no need for rush :D Maybe sleep a bit first. Tmorrow is also a day.
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Okay thanks Reaper.
Also I'm slepy tight now because I slept only in what 1:30 AM and I was thinking that Manji will not be longer in the story(got sick of him) and Elias(which is me) will be in a story..
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I'll invent the female character to clear up all this testosterone in this story. Expect alot of red faces. I'm gunna make the tek-tek so that everyone knows what she looks like as well. In fact, I'll make more than one female char just for the sake of balance and equilibrium. We can't have an all guy story. That's just wrong... :P

Female character pictures will either be posted in THIS post or in a separate post. Each char will have a name and a description. Btw, if anyone else wants to create a female char go ahead. I'm just volunteering to go first is all.

@Reaper: "I guess Z is atm intoxicated by his own might." epic post. XD

Mihara
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Description: A servant of Lord Julian. Not much is known about her past. She isn’t much of a fighter but can “cut” her way out of certain circumstances. She aims to become Julian’s wife…by any means necessary.

Arbina
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Description: The ruler of wildlife in several different forests. She protects animals of all kinds as best as she can. She doesn’t have any weapons or special powers but she knows her territory well enough to ensnare even the strongest of foes.
She wears an intimidating lion’s mask passed down in her family. It is the mask that lets everyone know her title as the “Forest Guardian”. She has never taken it off because, in her family, there is a curse placed among the women. It is said that if someone were to gaze upon her eyes…a terrible fate would befall them.

Ruezu
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Description: Honestly, if you don’t even have a clue who this is…lol jk.
A woman with power beyond the scope of warlords. There is no known extent to her power and she never uses it on her own. Only those who seek her out have the ability to use and control her power for their own ambition. She is a goddess who roams the earth and no one knows about her.
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