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[Daymio]

i MUST say thx to reaper cuz what he wrote was awsome!!1!

i wanted to posst something like that just little longer and with more description...

[Reaper]

Well... I haven't watched anime for ages.( I really mean ages. In terms of month and years) And I still can write pretty good
But seriously, I guess the problem is that you feel responsible for everything in here. But you don't have to. If you have to force yourself to writing, you won't write anything good. Just write when you are in the right mood for it or suddenly get an idea. Maybe for your story, maybe for this one... Maybe a short story. Thats probably the best way. And don't think that you have to write because you are responsible for this section. Zab and I will feel responsible when you don't.
@Daymio: Thanks. Somehow I constantely write what others wanted to write too...
@Elias: You wanted me to give comment, so... Well, you have some really nice ideas, with Elias and Sophie coming from another world from (slightly) different times, the background-story of Manji could have made him an awesome character, but some things you write are a bit... strange. Try to imagine. You are in a new world, suddenly. Would you say:

"Well, what do you what to do then?" Sophie said.
"Well, we can join an army that's fighting the greatest evil in this land."
"Hm, okay. Anything is fitting me." Then we started walking towards the front gate.

? Or would you be fearless when you suddenly have to fight against giant demons?
Actually I think that is the hardest part of writing. Thinking about how characters would react, what they would say, how they develop. Giving the characters( and the story) depth is what it makes extraordinary, together with a good variety of vocabulary and grammar and nice describtions of the world. Spelling and grammar ar two very important things, too. And ofc you should write longer chapters if you write a book.

[Elias]

Thanks, well most of the times when I'm in a mood I never get to write, so I try to think of the story when I going to play out side with Sophie.
Well I'm fearless at somethings like fighting but scared to do crazy things, and yeah I will try to write long chapters.
Something about me: You might not know but I tried to make stories when I was like 10 but most of the things I wrote I never continued or wrote so I just keep ideas at my had which is a good thing and a bad thing, also writing is my biggest weakens then anything else, because back in Ukraine when we had a test on writing I always get -D or you can say -2 in Ukraine.

[Evil Sonidow]

Well I'm fearless at somethings like fighting but scared to do crazy things

You came from another world and you're fearless while fighting giant demons? That IS crazy.
Also, protip: you end questions with the question mark. I'm saying this because:

"Wow, I wish I had that and what dose it do." Sophie asked.
Fine you gave a good reason but why is you hair color red, did you try to copy our mother."
"What should we do."
"What was that." I said in extincting voice.

Spoiler (Click to View)

SO exciting. *Cough*

And that's just some of the recent examples. There are way too many scattered around your posts, so please watch for that.

[Elias]

Okay Sonidow will try to make better and I said before I'm horrible at writing. but if I won't to write a story later on so I have to get better. Also ES, please can you write a chapter.

Also I'm going to make another chapter with Sophie and Elias around 8:00 PM for me okay so no one write about hem okay.

[Zabobula]

lol "90 degree angel" rofflecoptered right here.

I'm not gunna tell you to clean up your post a bit more. I mean I could pretty much detect that you were from around that area of Russia or Czech or somethin by the way you typed certain things. So forgive me for being a hippocrit. LOL

I'm gunna take a break as I eagerly await a chapter from EVIL SONIDOW which is a rarity in this forum novel. It feels like there are ALOT more people who are involved in this story who should be actually writing something.

To Anubis: You may be dead but you still have Tiny, Sharky, and Kira whom you can work with. Hope you haven't forgotten.

[Elias]

Zab yeah I'm from Ukraine but I already live about four years in America so yeah.

I will just write a chapter but will not put it in the Forum Novel.
Also no one is in the forum novel but he stopped reading this post in my opinion.
ES you better write before Wednesday okay because you haven't wrote in forever.

Lord Anubis I suggest that you made Kira avenge Anubis death, or something like that.

"Forgotten Map (Click to View)

Okay I will just tell what will happen in my next chapter after ES

Sophie and me just talk a little, then after a long walking trip they see two people so they start running towards them. When they got near them they talked a little and told that they wear send to buy a good map of everything around this place. So they show the map and it was so big (bigger then the one we have) but then the map started to be erased and in ten second only what we have right now was there and the two man forgot everything that was on the map as everybody else except Sophie and me. Then I will start talking about Julian like he was the one that erased the map and everybody memories except Sophie and me because we think different from every one in this world, and then starts talking about his new powers but that he has to faste lots of power for Noir not to take over the body. Sophie and me only remember one city that has half of one symbol and another half another symbol.

SO now I think what to make that town but it's like two different type of people live there for example, alchemist and mechanist or something like that but the two diffrent type hate each other like in Romeo and Julian how the two families hate each other but in here it's two type of on what people do to survive, but I wanted to hear your sugestions about who are the two types of people live there and I hope you understand what I'm saying and yes I'm horrible at making people understand me.

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Sorry for double post, but can some one write at least a chapter because ES is too lazy to write in Forum Novel.
I will delete this as soon as some one writes a chapter.

[Zabobula]

Zab yeah I'm from Ukraine but I already live about four years in America so yeah.

I will just write a chapter but will not put it in the Forum Novel.
Also no one is in the forum novel but he stopped reading this post in my opinion.
ES you better write before Wednesday okay because you haven't wrote in forever.

Lord Anubis I suggest that you made Kira avenge Anubis death, or something like that.

"Forgotten Map (Click to View)

Okay I will just tell what will happen in my next chapter after ES

Sophie and me just talk a little, then after a long walking trip they see two people so they start running towards them. When they got near them they talked a little and told that they wear send to buy a good map of everything around this place. So they show the map and it was so big (bigger then the one we have) but then the map started to be erased and in ten second only what we have right now was there and the two man forgot everything that was on the map as everybody else except Sophie and me. Then I will start talking about Julian like he was the one that erased the map and everybody memories except Sophie and me because we think different from every one in this world, and then starts talking about his new powers but that he has to faste lots of power for Noir not to take over the body. Sophie and me only remember one city that has half of one symbol and another half another symbol.

SO now I think what to make that town but it's like two different type of people live there for example, alchemist and mechanist or something like that but the two diffrent type hate each other like in Romeo and Julian how the two families hate each other but in here it's two type of on what people do to survive, but I wanted to hear your sugestions about who are the two types of people live there and I hope you understand what I'm saying and yes I'm horrible at making people understand me.

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Sorry for double post, but can some one write at least a chapter because ES is too lazy to write in Forum Novel.
I will delete this as soon as some one writes a chapter.

Double-Post fixed ^^.

ES, this is your last warning. If you do not post...YOU WILL DIE..........................IN MY NEXT POST! O_o It's a promise.

[Elias]

Your my hero Zab, really it's time to face justice ES.

Edit: Sanded him a PM.

[Zabobula]

Oh and btw...I was serious.

ES if you're smart you will kill me in your next chapter (but that would be too soon now, wouldn't it? It needs to coincide with the plot of the story) And I won't be posting for a while so that'll make your death that much sweeter. )XD

Edit: OF COURSE I'M NOT SERIOUS!!! Es, seriously...post already.