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[Silverthorn]

Stop making other people feel pissed off. They might feel inclined to let it out on you. *hint hint*

@v: it was actually not directed at you but hacker.

[Lord Anu]

So you can just kill my character, or do as you want.
Goodluck!

yeah same goes with my char.. .kill him.. badly.. i totally lost my interest into this ..

I will kill you, not your characters... Huh, ok, if you lost your interest into this I respect it. If I have to, I will make their death majestic and with honor

@ anubis:
Would you like to quit me?
And NO! I am not with this damn army!
Respect me as a writer and damnit respect my decision to go away from this army!

I respect you and I don't want you to quit. You were at the Ancient Lake together with army and all other heroes, but then you all separated and you stayed with Long, Harold and Simoneon(WITH ARMY!). Since that battle at the Ancient Lake you write nothing and you say that you're not together with army! How is that possible!? Stop confusing me and stop being angry, it won't solve anything.

Stop making other people feel pissed off.

It wasn't my purpose

[Reaper]

I think Hacker is talking about this:

Everything was black.
Soon his eyes got familiar with the darkness.
There was no moon over the camp of the army.
Somewhere a wolf wailed.
Somewhere a men stayed in the shadows.
This men had short brown hair and was wearing glasses.
"Getting out of the army-camp is harder than actually getting in", he whispered.
Suddenly he heard a sound.
"No longer talking to myself or else i will get caught", he thought.
He walked trough the tents.
He looked around a corner and saw the fire and the guards.
"If i'll stay out of the fires shine they won't see me."
He looked back to the tents of the other guys.
"Sorry guys... i'll come back and back you up."
And so he got out of the army-camp, traveled trough the forest and finally came to his goal.

Well, the last sentence obviously indicates that he isn't with the army and that something else has happened which is worth mentioning.
I personally don't care what people do with my character, I find it rather interesting to get used to a new situation. But if Hacker doesn't want it, we should respect that. Well, maybe you could use somebody else than Alec for your story, Sharky or one of the other brothers or whoever.

@Reaper: Sorry, I didn't know that Cen is such a positive person. He is something like Sharky, but much more serious. Ok, good to know...

Well, thats a bit more complex. As I wrote in my background story( which you don't have to remember), all in his village but him were murdered. Instead of seeking for revenge( like my other Cen did), he thinks that nobody else should suffer from a fate like that. That's why he became a wanderer. Seeing all those madness( I like that phrase) caused by the demons, he was unsure, but a dialogue with Simoneon( page 4 or 5 I think) convinced him that it doesn't help you to think about all thse things and that you should act as good as possible, thats the only way to change something. Now after your post he is unsure again about whether a better world is really possible( at least at night when he has time to think). Daymio might be able to help him because he has a similar fate while Philus obviously is helping Daymio atm. Well, as I said, its interesting to see what will happen, so it might end up completely different in the end. Thats the funny thing about it. So don't try to write about him like I want him to be
Btw: His character can in fact be interpretated in a completely different way. It's just the way I see it.

[Elias]

@Hacker:Ches, don't be so pissed-off, you know you could have said "Anubis you messed up about blah blah blah," like that even Zab messed up with Drachi and Manji because they don't know each other and he said that Drachi knew Manji.
@Anubis: My suggestion how to kill Simoneon, in the battle that will come.
@Everyone: I was thinking that the demon army that is going to attack city Quartz will be most defeated with gun powder.
I think this is all.

[Evil Sonidow]

There is no gun powder.

[Drahcir]

Hey Elias, this is like the 1200s or something wierd like that. No gunpowder.

As for my characters, well, they came from another planet.

[Reaper]

I wanna see one of our guys standing in front of Julian/ Noir, taking a gun, shooting and he is dead.
No, seriously. How should we get a gun? How should we defeat a whole army with it? How to kill Julian with it? And it could be boring anyway.
I have no idea how to kill Julian, but I'm sure we will somehow get it done. Who knows what will happen? Will the forest guardian help us? What will happen to Drahcir in the castle? Will Sonidow win against Z? What are they going to do afterwards? And so on. Maybe Noir is even able to fight against Julian's mind... Time will tell.
@beyond: Up to now nobody died. And if somebody dies than it is one of those who don't post anymore.

[Alectric]

lol, i kinda knew this would happen from the very start.
the ever-so-enthusiastic team degrades untill everyone is fighting, and everyone is dead except for one person, who keeps saying "but i gots and invisible shield and that, so i is not deadzorz"
and then it becomes a one guy story
why does everyone have to die anyway?
why not jsut one or 2?

[Elias]

Guys what I meant by gunpowder I meant the thing that blows up, and chines had invented it a couple of centuries ago, read the site in spoiler, and Drachi if you say its like A.D. 1200 then gunpowder is allowed and look at Lord of The Ring, they too had gunpowder in there.

Gunpowder (Click to View)

http://chemistry.about.com/od/historyofc...powder.htm

Also this story gets similar to Dune because everybody dies accept two good people in the end.
@Reaper: Yeah this story is unknown to us because not one person is writing, and Anubis had died remember.
This is it.

[Lord Anu]

-Gunpowder and real world
This gunpowder just doesn't fit in story... You Elias is trying to mix two worlds, our real world and this world in our novel. You can't do that, it's just to much and I doubt people will like that. You can't mix two worlds because it's not working about it in this story(it's working about war with Julian) and there are to many important characters from this new world, you can't just put some new characters from different worlds.
-Dying
As for dying, I killed Anubis to show you example how some characters could die. I killed him, but I didn't lost interest in novel, I keep writing. And who said that all good characters will die!? For now I count only Philus and Simoneon... All the others can survive. Especially Harold, I was working so hard to create a relationship between him and Arbina.
BTW: Where is Zab? I haven't seen him online for long time. He miss me, there is nobody to criticize my posts