Jahvansi's sprites (Arcane)

[Jahvansi]

Hi everyone!
I'm new at this forum and i am a totally newbie in spritemaking but i want to show you my sprites which i made until now
pls say me what i can make better

Sprites (Click to View)

without glow

old

V.2

V.3.2



Tom

Max

Superhero



Trey (Shaman King)

Ren Tao (Shaman King)

Eddy

Tristan

betingoan

Annie & Tibbers

Dave (requested by Sonic Boom)

Firen out of control

Deep - The animal within (scorpion)

Paro - Kingdom Zodiak

Re-made of one of my first sprites

Demon Sprite

Archer

Re-vamp ( beting's week)

Dark Mage

Ninja

Lightning mage ( re-vamp xlittlebob252)

Starter Sprite ( re-vamp xlittlebob252)

Ninja (Future Design)

Gankplank, the saltwater scourge

Tryndamere, the barbarian King

Timo

xLittlebob252

Thilo - collab pf+me

myself, winter outfit

Sesoma & Inuyasha

    Ezreal, The Prodigal Explorer

Riven, The Exile

Wukong, The Monkey King

Sprites for Contests (Click to View)

Re-mades:

Alectric

Darl

betingoan

Sprite-Contest:



War/Official Sprite Tournament:

Face-Pics (Click to View)

Vince

Jeff

Flash (Click to View)

Jack - Blast

PS: Sry for my bad english im from Germany

[Alblaka]

Honestly?
The first two sprits ARE PWNSOME. Just epic ^^

The lower two... hmm...
Let's say they are better then usually peoples "first sprites".


On the 3rd pic the hair looks like a dead bird or something... i would recommend to make it more spiky or something. Besides that it's quite fine.

The 4th one is kinda eye-candy, it's very bright.
However, a big no-go is his retarded-looking face... IT actually gives me the creeps XD
Nice idea on the hair color, though.

[Jahvansi]

yeah thank you very much!

i will try to make the hair look better at the 3rd pic but im not good at making hair xD

i tried to make the eyes in the 4th pic a houndred times but i suck at giving it a cool look maybe you can give me some tipps?

[LutiChris]

im curious, whut program do u use?

[Jahvansi]

the 3rd i made with Paint.NET and the others i made with Photoshop

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@Alblaka: okay here is my try on making better hair

[Bamboori]

better :)

to the 2nd pic: lf2 only supports pure black as transparency, so unless that pic is pure artwork it will look stupid in-game.


btw hey, another german user :D wie geht's?

[Jahvansi]

THX
okay i didnt know that^^
here is it without the glow:


ja mir gehts gut aba bin müde un hau mich jetzt aufs ohr^^
bis dann

[Yaff]

Good work (im a newbie too )

[Bamboori]

there's still glow on his body. i suggest to erase that pseudo-black, since the glowing-effect itsself looks nice :)

[Reaper]

On the 3rd pic the hair looks like a dead bird or something...

Spoiler (Click to View)

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Nice work with Henry's attack. Would be cool to see that one animated
The new guy has much better hair (the problem for the other one was the dark outline), but it's still lacking shading. The last one has a similar problem. When you shade hair, you mostly don't shade the inner part (Dennis is an exception), but give each streak highlights and shadows. Here you can find some very useful tips for spriting hair:
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=2707

I have to say, very nice work for a newcomer. I'm looking forward to see more of your sprites.