Please Comment Me

[jorjon]

This is my 1st ever sprite made (so plz be little nice)
I made a sprite has no name and stuff but wanna hear what u will tell me i should do to him... ((((((UPDATED)))))))



HES NAME IS SHARK

[PsychoPixels]

Okay, I'll try to be as nice as possible. :V

There's no shading, whatsoever, which results in a flat sprite. I'm guessing you didn't use a base, because the arms look too skinny, and are just unnatural. Look at human anatomy, you need to examine the arms and body. The legs look strange, as one is thicker (by several pixels) than the other, the shoes are too squashed down. Now all the flaws are spotted. The design of the hair looks good, although the lack of shade annoys me. The glasses could use a shine (highlight).

So far, you need work with your anatomy (first thing's first, get the shape right), then focus on the shading.

Never use pure black, at all.

Good luck, and good to see someone trying to make an original sprite, instead of editing or recoloring one. Never forget, practice makes perfect.

[jorjon]

ok i drew the base myself and if u know where can i get the "right" base would u be so nice to share it with me?

[LutiChris]

here's one...u could use tht was made by Alectric
click here

[jorjon]

well i used it and look at the difference!

COMMENT PLEASE

[PsychoPixels]

You've got the the basic shade going on for the clothing, I'd recommend adding highlights (basically a lighter tone of blue, to show the lighter areas due to the light source). His face doesn't look good, his eyes are too close to each other, and that expression is just weird for someone named Shark.

The hair is a pretty creative idea here, but you should smoothen it out, as I said before, you should show some depth in the hair. Although, I like the transition from black to white (could be more clear, in my opinion).

[lf2TimmE1]

wait..isn't the body just an older version of darius from pf or am i mistaken?
no i was right...using nearly the whole body of darius and claim it as ur own is kinda stupid...when u did ask for permission it's sth. different but i don't think u did.

[Ragor]

wait..isn't the body just an older version of darius from pf or am i mistaken?
no i was right...using nearly the whole body of darius and claim it as ur own is kinda stupid...when u did ask for permission it's sth. different but i don't think u did.

Bingo. You hit the nail on the head. It looks just like Darius.

[prince_freeza]

lets not make a fuss about the sprite guys. i am not bothered from him using my sprite without prem. and timm thanks man. now i know you got my back.

anyways about the sprite... is that supposed to be his hair? or like a shark fin? you didnt change the sprite that much besides the head. try adding some more features to make it looks more different. oh and i recommend you watch some tut's on the forums.

keep it up fella.

[chase123]

yeah i also thought that it was like your sprite pf!but i didn't post!

at the sprite:you should improve the hat and head looks fine!