[char] Azriel - First wave (paused)

[Azriel]

3/4 way through my first char, I decided to remake it, but I completed the first version anyway. This one will be my proper representative char, seeing that I've changed quite a bit since the last one.

previously:



now:



I won't be updating soon (only in a months time) but just for your anticipation



Azriel~

[KadajNoir]

loool
nice work.

[MH-Razen]

rofl, hope you don't change to muh during your work or you have to create a third version

[MH-Razen]

erm, underwear? erm.. where the do you see underwear in this picture? or you have x-ray eyes working on images!?

[Silverthorn]

hehe, nice, Az
however, I actually prefer the previous version, since the sprite in the second one looks a bit...strange... the first was multi-colored and proportions were lf2-like. Now, in the later version, it's all black and, sorry to say so, but the arms in the sprite are probably thinner than bones are :P
Also, the right shoulder (from our perspective the left) goes a little too high. Yea, that's basically it

[Hukko]

Huum... Good work.

[Azriel]

@Gad
I have can in no way understand what you mean for the first part. it's like: this coin is weird. how? it's blue? it's square? =\
the robotical part i get u. Arms have to be fixed yea.

@MH
I won't be changing much :P.

@BP
yea I didn't use a base for this one (except for the head I did look at henry's again coz I couldn't get the eyes right). Could fix that up later. about the firstecond comparison, dunno how I'd change it? I pretty much look like the 2nd version (actually the trousers in the photo aren't the ones I've sprited, I've got a diff pair with thicker white stripes). I'll lower the shoulder by 1~2 px; and thicken the arms :P



Azriel~

[Drahcir]

The hair looks a little...long...

And also the char looks somewhat fat compared to the photo.

[Azriel]

And also the char looks somewhat fat compared to the photo.

don't they all?

old ----------- new




Azriel~

[Zhyhm.Z]

Somehow his stance looks strange (to me)
-The hair should have more shading
-The shoulder is a bit too.. big. To me he looks like a football player. (or, i have problem with my eyes? )
-The arm is too straight (sorry about my bad English)
-And i like black. Way to go!