[Char:] My first Char :D

[TeeTeeTee]

Hey Guys!
Today I made my first Sprite (Ok, not my first but the first one I really want to work on )


Teh first version I made (left) is too normal, I think. The other version (right ) is with a pocket knife and wings.. not perfect but i like it
I haven't named him yet but i thought about Tristan well if u have got a name for him post it here maybe ill stay with it!

[Simoneon]

will he fly like aeron or other??

i like the first one ( but its just my opinion )

if this is your first sprite then gratz...

[TeeTeeTee]

will he fly like aeron or other??

Well not like areon just at one attack.. an attack like woody's tiger dash Ok, well i like the first one too and to make wings takes a lot of ime so i think i'll made him without wings

And i made a face ^^ forgot to post it i'll edit the first post :P

And thx

[Simoneon]

the face looks... not that good.. sry..

you need to do delete brown pixels in his neck. it looks really bad...

[TeeTeeTee]

Ok i think i know what u mean

old ---------------- new ---------------- more new

[Simoneon]

better, but needs little more.. idk what..

[Zanshin]

I think the head needs to get put a few pixels more left.
And some edits would be nice.

[TeeTeeTee]

No offense but i think its bad.. sry
i dont't like the blur and the right shoulder.. the head is right like he is And I dont want to spend too much time for a face (im working at standard sprites liek attack or jump and dc, of course )
working at sprite 6 now xDD

[Warg]

Not bad for a first i guess