[Mod]The Rulers Dawn.

[Angel_Adam]

hey,time for me to create a mod,its the story about angel_adam the lord of the empire,here is the intro at begining of the stage 1-1...

as u see in the intro,there are targets the first one will be (electro)..
but i need more powerfull chars...

[sadbhav]

well, It would be better if U had provided a prologue, but its cool. And I feel I shud tell u that it is "disgrace" and "failure" ^^ dont take it badly...

[snorsorbet]

Seriously, couldn't you think of a better title? Something more creative then Assasin's Angel's Creed I mean.

[Magnamancy]

I'm in a fairly giving mood, and as your mod looks interesting,
I've corrected your grammar 'n that, if you want it ...

Well anyway, I'm intersted to see how this turns out,
Good luck

Intro, stage 1-1... (Click to View)

Angel_Adam, an Angel that was stripped of his rank and possessions,
and was forced to flee because of his failure in an important
mission.
Due to the falure, and the arrogance of Julizen, the king of darkness
presents him with a list of eight empire rulers, to destroy.
Julizen tells Angel_Adam that if he can destroy them all, his status will
be restored, and his previous failure, forgiven.

So here begins Angel's adventure to destroy the rulers.
One by one, to a worse destiny ...

edit, w/ the new title, nice,
and you ninja snorsorbet

[Angel_Adam]

And by the way MH Helped me with really usefull tips about stage DCing,he is really a proo.
and i changed the title into the mask of wraith,cuze julizen is after the mask that gives the ultimate power to whoever holds it...

[DarkFirzenEX]

but i need more powerfull chars...

Kayz, if you want to, you can use DFEX A link to the thread is in my signature.. I just want an notice that DFEX is made by me :P

[Evil Sonidow]

Intro (Click to View)

Angel_Adam, an Angel that was stripped of his rank and possessions, was forced to flee because of his failure in an important
mission.
Due to that and the arrogance of Julizen, the king of darkness, presents him with a list of eight empire rulers to destroy.
Julizen tells Angel_Adam that if he can destroy them all, his status will be restored and his previous failure forgiven.

Click on the spoiler for more grammar fixes and a lot clearer reading.

[Angel_Adam]

wrong,man,its messed up,(because of his failure in an important mission),NOO.because he failed in an important mission.,
and julizen doesnt tells angel,he explains to angel.
and arrogance of julizen,NO WRONG arrogance of angel...

[Evil Sonidow]

Intro (Click to View)

Angel_Adam, an Angel that was stripped of his rank and possessions, was forced to flee because of his failure in an important
mission.
Due to that and the arrogance of the angel, the king of darkness presents him with a list of eight empire rulers to destroy.
Julizen explains to Angel_Adam that if he can destroy them all, his status will be restored and his previous failure forgiven.

There. And also:
Because of his failure in an important mission === because he failed in an important mission.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Reality: "Julizen explains to Angel_Adam that his status was revoked because he's failed elementary school english, and decided that nobody should have an underscore in an actual name."

[Lauli]

Spoiler (Click to View)

Reality: "Julizen explains to Angel_Adam that his status was revoked because he's failed elementary school english, and decided that nobody should have an underscore in an actual name."

I so lol'ed at this one :D

Anyways, is there ANYTHING that is actually halfway finished about that mod?