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Yes, you are going to read my first story ever!
Actually, this is not my username, it's my novel k?
Firstly read the spoiler.
And here it is!
All the chapter's not finished, now improving in it >.<
Sadly I'm gonna be busy so progress will be so slooooow.
AND I NEED SOME ADVICES AND FEEDBACK PLEASE! REPLY!
Thx,
~Taniaetc
Actually, this is not my username, it's my novel k?
Firstly read the spoiler.
Slogan(? dunno how to say it) (Click to View)
"When you wish upon the star, it will fall down to grant your wish, but making your life in danger,"
Summary (Click to View)
Tania was just a common student who wished to spend her time again in Indonesia. The wish was granted, but unfortunately it had consequences! Tania and her friends, now called as a team "Taniaetc" embarked on a journey to stop strange creatures, uneventful events from taking over the world! Moreover they must keep their true identity as heroes concealed (kinda like superheroes). Luckily they got some help from the Greek gods whom Tania, now the chief of the team favored. They got some semi-superpowers, risking their own lives just to save the world!
You need to know this (Indonesians don't need to) (Click to View)
How to pronounce Indonesian words:
A is like in "rather" and "far".
E is sometimes like in "rather" or "exact".
I is like in "is" and "kit".
O in "oracle" and "obligatory".
U like in "put" and "suit".
A is like in "rather" and "far".
E is sometimes like in "rather" or "exact".
I is like in "is" and "kit".
O in "oracle" and "obligatory".
U like in "put" and "suit".
Chapter 1 - Strangest Thing Happening (Click to View)
I turned on the TV. Switched to SBS when it suddenly showed up a documentary about Jakarta. They spoke about the food, some dancing people (which they found attractive of course), and the National Monument 'Monas'.
'Indonesia is the largest Muslim society in the world.' The man on the TV said.
Largest, yes. Best, no.
He went to a restaurant and ordered some food like the 'gudeg', chicken with egg and some rather sweet seasoning. Also a fried catfish with chili sauce on it.
'Wow, the taste. Really hot and the mixture of them, results in something really tasty. You should try it, people.'
You know, you remind me of 'Wisata Kuliner' an Indonesian documentary about food in my country.
I turned off the TV to focus on my mind, focusing my country.
Indonesia... I've got to fit in again. I missed my family and friends and pets (yes they're still alive) so much that I even couldn't stop thinking about them.
'Come on, pack up,' Dad shouted to me.
'Just wait,' I replied, sitting still.
We were packing up to go to Indonesia. Yes, tomorrow. Dad had planned to return to my country after studying in the university. This night, the last night of being here, in the boring times in Australia, which was really unfortunate for me. Why? Well it's basically because I just don't like being in a strange country with strange people and strange food and other strange things too. Oh... I wish I had my time again in Indonesia. Such a fun time my friends are having... I really wish that I was with them, rather than being in Australia. I thought of that as I walked to my bed... slowly. I said my wish of returning back silently while closing my eyes...
'Good night,' I said to myself.
Morning came. And I still closed my eyes, my hands are trying to grab my pillow. But one funny thing I noticed, the 'bed' wasn't even soft, it's made out of ceramic! And I wasn't lying, but leaning on a hard surface! Oh God, was that because of that wish? I mean the 'returning back to Indonesia' thing. I don't really know about it, so I opened my eyes and...
'Sister wake up!' My little sister Livia shook my shoulder.
'Huh? Where are we?' I replied.
'Duh, we're in INDONESIA!' She said.
'Indonesia?!' That word made me in a desperate need to jump sky high until I reach the stars.
'Yes! Yes!!! So it's holiday, isn't it?' I asked, seeming to be excited about this magical thing.
'Yes obviously. Let's go playing computer! It's the last day of our holiday!' She grabbed my hand and went to my (we get each) room.
'Do we have a laptop each?' I asked, half curious and half hopeful.
'Of course we do,' She replied with a slight laugh, 'Don't you remember Dad promised one to us?'
'Uh-huh,' I nodded.
'There's your laptop!' She pointed a laptop. Glittering with a black cover, which just suits me perfectly and the size too. Average. And on the top it was written 'Tania', my nickname. As I checked my laptop's specifications I felt a bit funny. Since when the heck I got this laptop? My parents never promised or attempting to give one to me. Hmmm, fascinating. Intel Core 2 Duo 2.5 GHz, with a 4GB RAM, and 100GB hard disk space I'll rule the Earth! I mean the laptop.
'Where's the power switch?' I asked.
'It's there,' She pointed a red button, sticking on my lappy and glowing on.
'Game on!' She yelled.
We went to play all the games the laptop had. I had the rest of my day asking my family about what's going on. Seriously I had no clue about it.
As I sleep I wished one more thing,
'Another extraordinary life...' I said.
'Indonesia is the largest Muslim society in the world.' The man on the TV said.
Largest, yes. Best, no.
He went to a restaurant and ordered some food like the 'gudeg', chicken with egg and some rather sweet seasoning. Also a fried catfish with chili sauce on it.
'Wow, the taste. Really hot and the mixture of them, results in something really tasty. You should try it, people.'
You know, you remind me of 'Wisata Kuliner' an Indonesian documentary about food in my country.
I turned off the TV to focus on my mind, focusing my country.
Indonesia... I've got to fit in again. I missed my family and friends and pets (yes they're still alive) so much that I even couldn't stop thinking about them.
'Come on, pack up,' Dad shouted to me.
'Just wait,' I replied, sitting still.
We were packing up to go to Indonesia. Yes, tomorrow. Dad had planned to return to my country after studying in the university. This night, the last night of being here, in the boring times in Australia, which was really unfortunate for me. Why? Well it's basically because I just don't like being in a strange country with strange people and strange food and other strange things too. Oh... I wish I had my time again in Indonesia. Such a fun time my friends are having... I really wish that I was with them, rather than being in Australia. I thought of that as I walked to my bed... slowly. I said my wish of returning back silently while closing my eyes...
'Good night,' I said to myself.
Morning came. And I still closed my eyes, my hands are trying to grab my pillow. But one funny thing I noticed, the 'bed' wasn't even soft, it's made out of ceramic! And I wasn't lying, but leaning on a hard surface! Oh God, was that because of that wish? I mean the 'returning back to Indonesia' thing. I don't really know about it, so I opened my eyes and...
'Sister wake up!' My little sister Livia shook my shoulder.
'Huh? Where are we?' I replied.
'Duh, we're in INDONESIA!' She said.
'Indonesia?!' That word made me in a desperate need to jump sky high until I reach the stars.
'Yes! Yes!!! So it's holiday, isn't it?' I asked, seeming to be excited about this magical thing.
'Yes obviously. Let's go playing computer! It's the last day of our holiday!' She grabbed my hand and went to my (we get each) room.
'Do we have a laptop each?' I asked, half curious and half hopeful.
'Of course we do,' She replied with a slight laugh, 'Don't you remember Dad promised one to us?'
'Uh-huh,' I nodded.
'There's your laptop!' She pointed a laptop. Glittering with a black cover, which just suits me perfectly and the size too. Average. And on the top it was written 'Tania', my nickname. As I checked my laptop's specifications I felt a bit funny. Since when the heck I got this laptop? My parents never promised or attempting to give one to me. Hmmm, fascinating. Intel Core 2 Duo 2.5 GHz, with a 4GB RAM, and 100GB hard disk space I'll rule the Earth! I mean the laptop.
'Where's the power switch?' I asked.
'It's there,' She pointed a red button, sticking on my lappy and glowing on.
'Game on!' She yelled.
We went to play all the games the laptop had. I had the rest of my day asking my family about what's going on. Seriously I had no clue about it.
As I sleep I wished one more thing,
'Another extraordinary life...' I said.
Chapter 2 - First Day of The Last Year Again (Click to View)
It was morning now, I went to prepare all my equipments and things then quickly went to school by bike. I met with my best friend Mala. At least she was (and is) the one whom I know well. And fortunately she knew me finely too.
'Is it the first day of year six?' I asked Mala, my best friend.
'Tell me that you are joking... newbie?' She rolled her eyes in confusion.
'Excuse me? Which year are we in now?' I replied.
'Obviously it's year six. With Mrs. Sulastri. Haven't you seen her?' She said.
'I just had no clue at all.'
'Hi guys. Having good time at holidays?' Fitri came and she patted my back. Also Mala's.
'Sadly no. I was in Australia, don't you guys remember? I even don't know about what's going on here. Tell me, please people, I don't wanna be played around,' I said.
'Oh God, please. You had your time in Australia and don't worry about it now. Let's talk about the "news" here,' Mala replied.
'Now can you tell it? Waste to go friend,' I asked.
'Nothing's really going on. We're just fine. Fitri's doing a good job at school, Irfan is up to his mischief again. And Reza's topping the class, after you, of course. If you have been here in High School,' She explained all the things happening. With groaning and some kind of monotone, a sure way of putting me to sleep.
'Was High School fun?' I asked excitingly. Fitri shook her head slowly.
'Way too much of homework, we are in despair!' Mala added.
'What about new mischief I can make? That's way fun!' Irfan suddenly showed up.
'And another rank I'm gonna get!' Reza 'popped' and it surprised me since he was rather short for my age. 'So how was Oz?' He continued.
'Good,' I replied briefly.
'Why?' He said.
'Nothing's bad there. I've got more pocket money! 20 dollars a week!' I paused, 'But the only bad thing is that I missed you guys!' I hugged them.
'Okay okay calm down. Did you prepare all the stuff? School stuff to be precise?' Irfan said.
I gave him a calm look. He nodded, understanding what am I 'saying' just by my body language. Later we jerked and talked all about Indonesia and Australia. I told them about the education systems in there. Their face looked weird when I was telling them about it.
'School, from January?! Holidays every three months! How unfair!' Irfan groaned.
'That's for you. But it's unfair too to be separated like breaking a pencil! They'll somehow get back but also not, if broken enough, like us,' I argued.
'You know, you should be a politican, your arguments... awesome,' Mala replied.
'Nah, I'll be a programmer. I never liked politics,' I said. As I spoke a helicopter landed slowly, we almost ran away but I saw a kind face looking at us,
'Don't worry guys!' The man in the helicopter announced, as he jumped out. He was wearing a helmet and a standard soldier camouflage clothes. But they looked weird since they never matched. Who's seen a dude wearing a medieval helmet and a modern-age suit?!
'Is it the first day of year six?' I asked Mala, my best friend.
'Tell me that you are joking... newbie?' She rolled her eyes in confusion.
'Excuse me? Which year are we in now?' I replied.
'Obviously it's year six. With Mrs. Sulastri. Haven't you seen her?' She said.
'I just had no clue at all.'
'Hi guys. Having good time at holidays?' Fitri came and she patted my back. Also Mala's.
'Sadly no. I was in Australia, don't you guys remember? I even don't know about what's going on here. Tell me, please people, I don't wanna be played around,' I said.
'Oh God, please. You had your time in Australia and don't worry about it now. Let's talk about the "news" here,' Mala replied.
'Now can you tell it? Waste to go friend,' I asked.
'Nothing's really going on. We're just fine. Fitri's doing a good job at school, Irfan is up to his mischief again. And Reza's topping the class, after you, of course. If you have been here in High School,' She explained all the things happening. With groaning and some kind of monotone, a sure way of putting me to sleep.
'Was High School fun?' I asked excitingly. Fitri shook her head slowly.
'Way too much of homework, we are in despair!' Mala added.
'What about new mischief I can make? That's way fun!' Irfan suddenly showed up.
'And another rank I'm gonna get!' Reza 'popped' and it surprised me since he was rather short for my age. 'So how was Oz?' He continued.
'Good,' I replied briefly.
'Why?' He said.
'Nothing's bad there. I've got more pocket money! 20 dollars a week!' I paused, 'But the only bad thing is that I missed you guys!' I hugged them.
'Okay okay calm down. Did you prepare all the stuff? School stuff to be precise?' Irfan said.
I gave him a calm look. He nodded, understanding what am I 'saying' just by my body language. Later we jerked and talked all about Indonesia and Australia. I told them about the education systems in there. Their face looked weird when I was telling them about it.
'School, from January?! Holidays every three months! How unfair!' Irfan groaned.
'That's for you. But it's unfair too to be separated like breaking a pencil! They'll somehow get back but also not, if broken enough, like us,' I argued.
'You know, you should be a politican, your arguments... awesome,' Mala replied.
'Nah, I'll be a programmer. I never liked politics,' I said. As I spoke a helicopter landed slowly, we almost ran away but I saw a kind face looking at us,
'Don't worry guys!' The man in the helicopter announced, as he jumped out. He was wearing a helmet and a standard soldier camouflage clothes. But they looked weird since they never matched. Who's seen a dude wearing a medieval helmet and a modern-age suit?!
Sadly I'm gonna be busy so progress will be so slooooow.
AND I NEED SOME ADVICES AND FEEDBACK PLEASE! REPLY!
Thx,
~Taniaetc
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