My sprites. {Newbie}

[Pyro Lizard]

My first sprites.. What can I do to improve? Any ideas for me? Feedback Pl0x?

Thunder element character..


Archer style character. Dan


Reaper themed character.


Was gonna be a representitive char..


One of my personal favorites. My ninja..Guy.


Arctic Wolf.


Fire mage. (Bat edit)

PL

[chase123]

they are good sprites for a newcomer!but in the second one you should improve the legs they look fat!

[Pyro Lizard]

Lol. Okay will do

[XLittlebob252]

and also make them a bit bigger i cant see them and also shade the face
but nice start for a beginner

[Pyro Lizard]

I made few updates to my sprites. I would also like to know.. How do I add like a "Spoiler" type thing. Im still learning the bits and pieces of this..

Alectric edited this post 08-01-2010 03:48 AM because:

Here is a short guide: http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/misc.php?a...help&hid=7

[Taniaetc]

The ninja one looks very cool for first sprites. I like the pose, shading, you mention it.
Nice job.

[Pyro Lizard]

Thanks. I'm working on an entire gallery. I just need to know what I need to improve on.

[Eddie]

I have to say for me, it's probably the hair that you need to work on (possibly the hardest thing on any sprite). It doesn't seem all that good to me, maybe you should look towards the hair that people do on their characters or even Little Fighter characters themselves hair. To me quite a lot of your hair seems block shaded, whereas if you look at hair on other peoples characters it's more like strips.

I have to say the shape of the hair on the last sprite is a bit iffy for me too..

Other than that you're doing quite well.
Keep it up!


Eddie

[Yaff]

i like the little grim reaper thingy

[Marshall]

proportions are actually quite good and it's nice to see that you are trying different poses. As Eddie said, your hair needs some work.