Devil louis

[Louis]

Hello guys i need some suggestion on this this is my creation suggest me so i can improove it

[Ascor]

It looks pretty okay but could you do that next time on a clean sheet?
There are many disturbing squiggly lines in the background

[Alblaka]

Hmmm, this rather looks like some kind of Devil-Vegeta then Louis to me ^^
May add some things that clearly show it's Louis... since it's uncolored, hair is not an option, but may you can add some armor parts?

[MnM]

the human rarely consists of straight lines.

Thats right my friend.

PS: I don't care if he is a devil. His packs are made with straight lines so is the body. Try to correct it.

[Louis]

the human rarely consists of straight lines.

Thats right my friend.

PS: I don't care if he is a devil. His packs are made with straight lines so is the body. Try to correct it.

Ok guys i do it as quickly as possible and next time in clean sheet

[fire power]

I think add some ripped clothes but not to much and evil eyes

[chase123]

Made your guy into an lf2 sprite for training:

I hope you don't mind .

[Louis]

Made your guy into an lf2 sprite for training:

I hope you don't mind .

Ya its good but mot like that as i think dont mind

[Akki]

Made your guy into an lf2 sprite for training:

I hope you don't mind .

Ya its good but mot like that as i think dont mind

Hey chase its good but i think some shading is required

[Taniaetc]

For some reason it looks like a Sasuke + Deviljin (whatever his name is) fusion.
You should make him look more 'Louis', add some armour, change the hairstyle etc. since at the moment I couldn't recognise himself.
If you'd like to keep the traits (wings, weapon, pants) make it more original. Even though I don't know a lot about Naruto and Tekken, I could recognise the features (Sasuke's wings-thing, Deviljin's hairstyle and pants etc.)