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Too round shapes and too much brighter color of shading makes him look fat. You could leave more darker areas.
What I'm trying to say:
Face disturbing me the most, eyes are too small and distance between them is too wide.

better?

edit: oh hari you ninja!

The lower part legs looks weird. those dark line, i've never saw something like that, you might fix that..
and the thing which exg8 pointed out

(09-04-2013, 07:03 PM)Marko Wrote: [ -> ]The lower part legs looks weird. those dark line, i've never saw something like that, you might fix that..

I think its style of those pants

but it looks like bad try of doing musacles in tight pants. :P

to the pants part: i don't know what rid me on that day when i mad them this way, so no idea
to the eye part: well both eyes are partially getting hid by the hair which hangs over, i actually drew the eyes over the hair and then erased the part where the hair strands go over. So i don't know.

is the overall contrast still lacking?
also i will try to apply hari's suggestion.

something something different.

Some more movement would be really nice. Breathing, leg movement or what not.

It looks wrong.
Try do this in your real life. You will know what iam talking

i present t' ye, firen's disciple!