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Alright guys...Alectric can you do the honers? por favor
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![[Image: neuebitmapk.png]](http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/7618/neuebitmapk.png) > ![[Image: trickityremake2.png]](http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/7734/trickityremake2.png) Reaper
![[Image: Franz-2.png]](http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m122/tRickityHouses/Franz-2.png) > ![[Image: 8h7FN.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/8h7FN.gif) LutiChris
![[Image: nicksmall.jpg]](http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m122/tRickityHouses/nicksmall.jpg) > ![[Image: nick_samurai-1.png]](http://i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff437/Siegvar/nick_samurai-1.png) Siegvar
![[Image: WiltSmall.jpg]](http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m122/tRickityHouses/WiltSmall.jpg) -> ![[Image: entrysmallnew2.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/entrysmallnew2.png) Whaat
![[Image: RockyBig.jpg]](http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m122/tRickityHouses/RockyBig.jpg) > ![[Image: 27530331b147958a724f4ec4c4edd16f-d3hd6ed.gif]](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/147/2/7/27530331b147958a724f4ec4c4edd16f-d3hd6ed.gif) Designheaven
![[Image: nicksmall.jpg]](http://i1184.photobucket.com/albums/z327/Reinaradasu/nicksmall.jpg) ---------> ![[Image: nick.png]](http://i1184.photobucket.com/albums/z327/Reinaradasu/lf2%20sprites/nick.png) Monolith
![[Image: nickbig2.jpg]](http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m122/tRickityHouses/nickbig2.jpg) >>> ![[Image: trickityremadefreeza.png]](http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5155/trickityremadefreeza.png) prince_freeza
![[Image: Franz-2.png]](http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m122/tRickityHouses/Franz-2.png) >>> ![[Image: 2w2mqec.png]](http://i53.tinypic.com/2w2mqec.png) Daymio
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06-12-2011, 02:07 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-12-2011, 02:12 PM by Whaat.)
Critics and Comments D:
Reaper:
Nice, i didn't know that you can sprite D: but somehow it looks pixelated to me (maybe it's becouse of shading style) shading also is too dark.
Luti:
Awesome, nice colors, animation is always +, and i don't see any mistakes :/ you got my vote.
Sieg:
It's good, especially the sakura print and shading. But i would have expected little more LF styled proportions and face isn't as detailed as everything else :/ some scar or smthing would have been nice bonus. Still, there's no way i wouldn't vote this.
Whaat:
It's kinda okay but there's smthing wrong with the shading of the pants, also the proportions are maybe little off, dunno.
DH:
Meh, it looks too different :/ there's no stomachcloth or sleeves, also that effect is kinda pointy, and it's imo kinda quickly made, it would be better without the animation or the effect.
Monolith:
I expected somehow little more of you ;< it's sad that this entry isn't as good as many of your other sprites.
PF:
I guess you tried to make it HF styled, but this is LF2 D: and i like LF2>HF (atleast atm .gif) )
Daymio:
It's sad that you always try to make the sprites from scratch, but as you maybe can see, your sprites' hands and legs are always spaghetti, so i would recommend you to use an already made base to keep the proportions and other stuff right.
Might be back, might be not :^) anyways awesome to see you guys again!
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(06-12-2011, 02:07 PM)Whaat Wrote: Sieg:
It's good, especially the sakura print and shading. But i would have expected little more LF styled proportions and face isn't as detailed as everything else :/ some scar or smthing would have been nice bonus. Still, there's no way i wouldn't vote this.
Seems like quite a number of people are bugged out by the simplistic face.
I was experimenting with more focus on emotions and found a simpler face more conducive for someone of my inexperience in the area. I think I like the result, and will give it a few more tries in future.
Maybe I'll chalk this one up to personal preference if the reaction stays mostly the same.
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1) DO NOT PM ME
2) Go read up on anatomy and proportions online. (google is your best friend)
3) Go read up on pencil sketching-shading.
4) Practice by making FULL character sheets. (Refer to bases and references if you have to, occasionally try doing things from scratch. You have to mix both methods; bases and without.)
5) DO NOT be an arrogant, self-righteous prick when people try to give useful critiques, and ignore the ones who are flaming idiots. (Flaming them back makes you one of them.)
6) Repeat steps 2 to 5 until you're happy, or you think you're good, then start sharing your knowledge with your fellow spriters.
7) Showcase your sprites. At first, do not be discouraged when you don't get any critiques, or lousy/generic critiques. Continue practicing and showcasing your work. With more sprites, it will be clearer what your strengths and weaknesses are, and people may be better able to give you better critique.
Lastly, if you think saying all this makes me an arrogant, self-righteous prick who is too selfish to share his knowledge...
Then I say you cannot recognise wisdom when I've just slapped you in the face with it. (Also, those steps are the same steps I used to get to where I am, I don't know any way else to truly learn.)
Unless you think its worth my time, go F*** yourselves. I'm not going to bother to even reply to PMs like "can you help me make this character?" anymore.
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i cant undarstand way i got just 3 votes?..
i think this sprite is my best lf2 sprite and i dont think it was so terrible... than way?... this time i realy dont undarstand way...
ok the animation wasnt so good but what about the sprite?...
im really disappointed...
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One thing i don't like,why members who is in the contest can vote,that i realy don't like,our opponents voting for us.
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(06-13-2011, 03:02 PM)Monolith Wrote: One thing i don't like,why members who is in the contest can vote,that i realy don't like,our opponents voting for us.
Because opponents must'n vote for themselves.They should vote only for others.
Also if all members of this contest don't vote,then who will vote?! Just some members,who haven't joined.Those members who haven't joined and not so interested so some of them will not going to vote.So the other people who vote,they are just a few and voting don't tell the truth (because a they are not so much and to make a serious voting needs many people who vote)
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@DesignHeaven:
I'd say it's due to anatomy and pose, as well as the unsmooth special effect and static animation. The shading and detailing is pretty lf2 styled though, except for the pants which lack much of any contrast.
I did this to you for obvious reasons. You have just wasted a lot of time. Congratulations.
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06-17-2011, 11:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-20-2011, 12:02 PM by LutiChris.)
i know it's a bit early but whut the heck..it's YinYin's birthday here goes
i'll change this in case it does change...
1st - LutiChris & Siegvar
2nd - prince_freeza
3rd - Whaat & Reaper
This weeks selection is...
YinYin
Requirements:- One entry per member.
- Your sprite must be based off that user's old sprite
...and don't forget to add in the old sprite as well when ur done with your entry
- You can't remake a re-made sprite you or someone else already made.
- Recoloured sprites wont be accepted.
- Size: no bigger than 158x158.
Submit your entries before Friday July 1stth!!
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(06-17-2011, 11:54 AM)LutiChris Wrote: 1st - LutiChris
2nd - Siegvar
3rd - prince_freeza
Damn it, damn me, damn Raptor Jesus, because I forgot to vote. Would've been a tie with Luti and Sieg. Damnation domination.
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there is no sprites in his thread 
only this:
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