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[Ascor]

Qoute:"Alec then created a giant ice blade and sent it at Nostro"
HECK YEAH :P
i can finally transform into freeze :P
Please correct this to glass blade :P

[Zabobula]

Ok, I'm sorry, I'm generally pissed off now.

To Anubis...

Always me... No matter, I already used to. Well, you don't have to be pissed off Zab because I won't making troubles anymore with english grammar. Even if I write something at the end of this story I will be careful.
Sorry, but I can't write in Word. I got some viruses on my computer so I can't open Microsoft Word for very long time... I must fix my computer a little, but I never have a time.
Btw I fixed mistakes...

First, NO, it's not always you. Second if you are having problems with virus I'll just recommend some software to you. Judging by your statement you don't have any anti-spyware.

My recommendations:

Avast Antivirus (Download the free edition)

www.avast.com

A-Squared Free

www.emsisoft.com/en/software/free/

Advanced System Care (PC clean up tool)

http://www.iobit.com/advancedwindowscareper.html

Iobit Security 360 (Still a beta but very fast and useful. Quick scans in 5 mins)

http://www.iobit.com/beta.html

You shouldn't have one tracked cookie after all the information I just gave you.

[Reaper]

@Zabobula: I recomment not to make such a rule with deleting the posts. Why?
- Amount of grammar errors should be connected to the length of the etxt
- There might already be another post reffering to the one with mistakes
- The writer might notice that his post was delted after a day or so when the story went on. I know, he should have corrected it before, but anyway...
Not to mention it screws up story continuity. ~ Evil Sonidow
- English grammar isn't easy for everyone and like I said before: This novel should get as many people as possible into writing.

What I suggest is that you don't correct every mistake in the posts, but when you see that a post has too many errors, you edit it or send a PM like
"Please fix the grammatical/spelling mistakes( depends on the post) in your post."

btw: some twists in the last posts... I'm interested in where this is going. Too bad I have too much work with school to write something. But maybe on weekend.

[Daymio]

true....lot of us make grammar mistakes cuz we are afraid that someone is gonna write something before us and change the background story of which are we supouse to write so we must hurry up and post it as fast as we can....

like me now.... i am writing something and i must hurry so somene wouldn't change story before me....


BTW. i know i can't kill some character except mine own... but.... I invented Noir (i mean i put him in story) and does that mean i can kill him?

[Reaper]

Well, I don't want Noir to be killed. But the rule is mainly because everyone should stay able to take part in the story. Drahcir let King nostro die anyway so you are allowed to kill Noir I guess.

[Daymio]

ok...great.... time for Noir to die...muhahahaha

BTW. i started writing my next part but my stupid PC deleted it...

so if anyone is gonna post something please don't include me cuz i will post my part tonight or tomorrow in morning...

[Evil Sonidow]

Ok, I'm sorry, I'm generally pissed off now.

To Anubis (this is regarding your current post): If you can take the time to write these long entries, you can also take the time to correct them. I'm not sure if your english is not that good or not but seriously man. I'm pretty sure that you are writing your stories in the quick reply box instead of doing it the right way and writing it all to Microsoft Word so it can be spell checked. And even if you spell check it, it's good to read over your story so that you can correct any mistakes that spell check wont get.

I was literally panting for air after I corrected one of your earlier posts and because of that I'm done being the spellchecker.

I suggest a grammar rule for this forum novel: NO MORE THAN 4-6 GRAMMAR ERRORS IN EACH POST. ANY POST WITH MORE THAN 6 ERRORS WILL HAVE THEIR POST DELETED.

Harsh? If you guys are actually serious about this story you'd say yes to my suggestion and not have to go through the trouble of reading low-quality posts.

EDIT: The suggestion for the grammar rule goes for EVERYONE. Even me.

I knew this was coming when you decided to become the spellchecker. Now suffer the consequences.

Also, you can't abuse your mod powers because you hate grammar mistakes. Stop being bitchy, there are much more important things in this forum novel to be bothered with than grammar.

[Zabobula]

Ok, I'm sorry, I'm generally pissed off now.

To Anubis (this is regarding your current post): If you can take the time to write these long entries, you can also take the time to correct them. I'm not sure if your english is not that good or not but seriously man. I'm pretty sure that you are writing your stories in the quick reply box instead of doing it the right way and writing it all to Microsoft Word so it can be spell checked. And even if you spell check it, it's good to read over your story so that you can correct any mistakes that spell check wont get.

I was literally panting for air after I corrected one of your earlier posts and because of that I'm done being the spellchecker.

I suggest a grammar rule for this forum novel: NO MORE THAN 4-6 GRAMMAR ERRORS IN EACH POST. ANY POST WITH MORE THAN 6 ERRORS WILL HAVE THEIR POST DELETED.

Harsh? If you guys are actually serious about this story you'd say yes to my suggestion and not have to go through the trouble of reading low-quality posts.

EDIT: The suggestion for the grammar rule goes for EVERYONE. Even me.

I knew this was coming when you decided to become the spellchecker. Now suffer the consequences.

Also, you can't abuse your mod powers because you hate grammar mistakes. Stop being bitchy, there are much more important things in this forum novel to be bothered with than grammar.

Ehh...you're right. But you can't ignore the fact that it is important. If you're thinking of the plot, then THAT is something not to worry about. I could have ended this story on my most recent post if I wanted to. But I decided to switch things up a bit. Now we have new material to work with.

Now actually regarding the story, my last posted ended with the idea that everyone was split up now. Now someone can expand on that idea or go on with their own...it's their choice.

[Elias]

Okay, I have a big change in the story.
How about the whole world that they are in vanish and the main people, the army, and Julian's castle go to another world, but I want to write all of that .
Also I hope everybody understand me.

[Reaper]

I understand what you mean, and I guess the evil version of you is supposed to destroy that world, but
- what does it help if we are suddenly in another world?
- why will the main people, the army and the castle go to another world? How? Why doesn't the rest? Don't tell me that the evil part of Manji is rescuing them
and another thing: What are they going to do after they defeated Julian then?
One good thing about it would be that we have new material to work on. But there are easier ways to get that than destroying the whole world.
So yeah, I don't really like the idea, but I might change my mind if you can give me some good answers to my questions. Also to keep the story logically flawless( None of you is going to write something about fantasy and logic I hope )