Into the new world ( Updates - #4 is out! )

[Sharkitoon]

The burning hair, I don't know how to explain the heat-wave but well,
it's not like I'm a good author, but I'll improve, Thanks for the comment,
You always help me when I post my stories

About the guys, maybe I'll reveal their past in chapter four or five.
There's a reason he ain't sad, not everyone is sad when all adults are gone.
What do you mean old part? Yes the post below wont be about current chapters

EDIT: Thanks i already edited the chapter

Reaper edited this post 08-20-2010 10:09 PM because:

What I mean is: Instead of reposting your thread, you can just add a line to your first post like Edit: I've rewritten some of the paragraphs. Due to that, some of the comments below refer to other chapters than the ones you see now. Also there is no problem with burning hair (I guess, I don't know what would happen after a heatwave like that). But it should have a purpose. For instance, you could add some lines in between describing how he tries to extinguish the fire.