Revamped Sprites (52%)

[Siegvar]

Siegvar (Click to View)

smexy
when will you start to stick to one way of doing things?
her right thigh becomes small in one frame - this is weird
to adress your hip issues this would be ok if her hip twisted a little - pushing the left one a little to the front to compensate that movement
this would show her hip more from the side and bend the left knee

Alectric (Click to View)

i dont like that shine much
why ice? - it couldve been a yellow energy sphere or just a glowing hand
anyway sieg is right - he looks more like an all oiled in rubber terminator set to extinguish a whole race - instead of a simple rough raged beast
doesnt look like you need to practice shading anymore

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now i dont know what to vote

I'll stick to one style when I'm good enough. (Which is probably gonna be never. :P)

I also thought the ice was a bit wierd at first, but soon decided it could be a pretty novel idea... aliens having the technology or innate ability to defy the laws of thermodynamics... thus... ICE CRYSTALS!!!!! or.. I dunno.
Even though the stereotype of advanced civilisations is that they always seem to manipulate pure energy of some form unrecognisable to us humans... who says we have to even be able to see it! maybe it physically manifests as a phenomenon similar to something we are more familiar with... like... ICE CRYSTALS!!!!

but.... the ice crystal is probably a bit anti-climatic? seems abit too small... too solid... like he just took an ice cube out of the refrigerator and held it in his hand... rather than it sprouting from his fingertips.