Apoc's Sprites

[Siegvar]

Hmm... based on these sprites... and style aside...

The contrast of colour tones you pick seem to be much better imo, especially with the hair and skin. They have a better balance and helps to keep the details visible but not distracting. Very nice. Your ability to pick colours well is something I envy quite a bit.

In this sprite of ken though, your weaknesses in posing, and proportion is clearer than in your usual sprites. I actually think the general pose in your sprite is the most dynamic and well done among the 3, but a few little details stick out like sore thumbs.
Mainly, the angle at which the head is tilted, and the proportions of the legs in relation to the waist. Also, in general, the entire sprite looks quite unbalanced or weak because of the odd angle flow from head to toe.

PF's sprite also suffers from proportion issues, but his general pose looks a lot more stable in this instance, even with the few minor issues.

Monolith's sprite pales in technical ability when it comes to management of details, but the pose balance is also reasonably stable, and again, its in spite of a few minor balance issues.


commenting on sprites like this makes me itch to sprite as well...

well,thanks for comments,i'm gona make now brand new detailed sprite

Hmm.. okay, if that's the case, try and pay attention to the hair and face details. Try not to make the details so tiny they can't be easily seen at the regular size. Like in this sprite of ken, I can't see much of the hair's shading, and I think you didn't put any face details in at all.

Btw, just in case you mixed them up: The one in red is for Apoc's sprite, and the one in Green is for yours. I just realised it might not have been clear.