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Deadly past (remake)
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05-31-2010, 04:53 AM
Well, very nice, some tension, but it sometimes has useless sentences, like 'It came from a bonfire'. I'm sure that's very nice, but....
One thing I find funny about this is the villain. 'Evil laughter'. Too cheesy for me, and I love cheese. The main char's a bit messed up, though.
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Deadly past (remake) - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-20-2009, 08:08 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by Zabobula - 06-20-2009, 08:52 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-20-2009, 09:26 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by The Lost Global Mod - 07-03-2009, 07:54 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by Ascor - 07-04-2009, 09:09 AM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by Lord Anu - 07-04-2009, 05:14 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by Reaper - 07-19-2009, 02:33 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by The Lost Global Mod - 07-19-2009, 04:36 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by The Lost Global Mod - 05-22-2010, 10:39 PM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by Reaper - 05-23-2010, 11:58 AM
RE: Deadly past (remake) - by oliveryungo - 05-31-2010, 04:53 AM



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