Revamped Sprites (52%)

[bashscrazy]

I like it! Cape movement is really nice
Her face is fine imo

[Alectric]

He's so shiny

The only reason that ice crystal thing is there is because i love having a secondary light source, because its the simplest way to add a bit of 3D into it ;D
Yeah, i know, 3D isnt LF2 style, well cry me a river or two.
Im not going to miss this round >:]

@ lutichris, that animation looks fantastic! Great work their, bro ;D
(TELL US YOUR SECRET PROGRAM!)

EDIT: CRAP, totally forgot the tail, will be back shortly D:
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[Ariel]

@Alec
WOW
this sprite looks awesome i like it!
but this crystal or ice dont looks very good i think u should change it to some fire

[Siegvar]

Alec, that looks like you turned yinyin's "Martian man hunter" into a "Martian mankind exterminator"

[betitngoan]

lol there's just too much going on here... :P
Do u guys think her face is ugly, im not quite sure 'bout it?

OMG
i love love love your gif
your GIF is the BEST in this forum !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[DoIIIi]

it looks ok
animation have got better now definitly

[LutiChris]

everybody go & vote.....
oh yea...sorry monolith & DesignHeaven for not updating it
my bad

YinYin's > Entry's
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Monolith
> DesignHeaven
prince_freeza
> Jerkington XIII
> Doj
> LutiChris
> Daymio
Siegvar
Alectric

Alectric edited this post 07-05-2011 11:06 PM because:

Poll is posted up now!

[YinYin]

thank-hail
beware, everyone gets his share
take the advices seriously, not personally

from fire to ice (Click to View)

Whaat (Click to View)

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why fire?
also why no flashing when you animated it?
apparently i should have not put in a single frame of an animation there
the tips of harlequins hat actually have bells on them and not little yellow strings (the lines on my sprite are blur from the hat spinning animation)

Monolith (Click to View)

uber angry dark sayajin demon samurai knight!
but his head has gotten quite weird
puffy cheeks - crosseyed and a huge wig

DesignHeaven (Click to View)

those hairy legs and perspective make him look a bit like a blue yeti with a green walking stick
better stick to normal perspective

prince_freeza (Click to View)

legs seem a bit short and stiff
arm animation is nice and smooth but the torso just bobs up and down
have you ever considered drawing hair by only giving a hint of its structure through a few highlights instead of whole streaks all from one point?
itll allow you to draw more diverse hairdos

Jerkington XIII (Click to View)

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does he have a forehead?
if you do pixelated sprites maybe you should try to do them like mathieu
draw the whole thing at 4 times the intended size with rather big one colored areas and then size the finished sprite down
this will allow you to improve your proportions easier aswell
also he uses grenades - not shiny orbs :I

Doj (Click to View)

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that background color is a pretty bad choice
her shoulders are quite wide for a girl
and the arms would look less stiff if you bend them a little

LutiChris (Click to View)

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you really need to put those skills into something other than just idle animations

Daymio (Click to View)

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if my sprite wouldnt be next to it i wouldnt have noticed what you resprited
well its the only masked sprite but the mask isnt really a core feature of this character - actually its just there because of a different contest where your own character had to cosplay another user - ill have to do something about this and remove mask and hat
it makes me think of older entries such as these

maybe try something light next time

Siegvar (Click to View)

smexy
when will you start to stick to one way of doing things?
her right thigh becomes small in one frame - this is weird
to adress your hip issues this would be ok if her hip twisted a little - pushing the left one a little to the front to compensate that movement
this would show her hip more from the side and bend the left knee

Alectric (Click to View)

i dont like that shine much
why ice? - it couldve been a yellow energy sphere or just a glowing hand
anyway sieg is right - he looks more like an all oiled in rubber terminator set to extinguish a whole race - instead of a simple rough raged beast
doesnt look like you need to practice shading anymore :p

now i dont know what to vote

[Monolith]

Hey i have added gif not png,better change it,or i will get mad.
here is link where is GIF,ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread...44&page=52

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puffy cheeks - crosseyed and a huge wig

well this revamp not make sprite so very like yours

[DoIIIi]

it's doesn't greatly matter Monolith
your sprite is very nice though, cheer up!