Revamped Sprites (52%)

[betitngoan]

> final?

awesome sprite !! i love love love love it
too handsome !!!
too cool !!
handsome enought to die !!!!
die !!!
look like he is talking to me
" nah~~ ! come here ,dude ! i love you "
yeHHHHHHH , I LOVE YOU !!!
oh gods !!! why are you being like this !!!
i will vote only for u
you're the best spriter .... ever !!!!!

what the problem with your sprite ??
i don't know but your sprite is down this time
if you're too busy , you don't need to join
the torso ... bad
the face ... bad
the hair ... bad
maybe you don't have more creative in the brain
it's the truth
i am not trying to bring you down but this sprite is very bad
bad bad bad.....

[klodasmone]

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> final?

awesome sprite !! i love love love love it
too handsome !!!
too cool !!
handsome enought to die !!!!
die !!!
look like he is talking to me
" nah~~ ! come here ,dude ! i love you "
yeHHHHHHH , I LOVE YOU !!!
oh gods !!! why are you being like this !!!
i will vote only for u
you're the best spriter .... ever !!!!!

what the problem with your sprite ??
i don't know but your sprite is down this time
if you're too busy , you don't need to join
the torso ... bad
the face ... bad
the hair ... bad
maybe you don't have more creative in the brain
it's the truth
i am not trying to bring you down but this sprite is very bad
bad bad bad.....

I cannot let this pass. With my righterous fist I will crush the dirty infidel scum that dares to insult one of the Masters.

Let me tell you this, infantilic emo of smug-festered boya, Sieg is so advanced that he can make you an eunuch with his supa spriting skills. Just look at it: the torso is excellent, - Sieg challenged himself with making a semi-combat stance and he succeeded brilliantly; the face is emotional and not the standart seriousness of one horizontal line for a mouth; the hair is licked back with hot, sticky, white... gelatin thingy... looks like Aizen's from Bleach (also, the design reminds me of one of the 13 Squad Captains, but I can't remember the name, because I dropped the series at 19x something episode). The sprite has a badarse, shiny and sharp sword, held by a firm grip, and in the other hand we have a nice touch, a sake bottle, hm, and who doesn't like sake. Yumyyy. The folds are masterfully done, it has an emotion to it, a thing, that was lacking in previous Sieg's sprites. The only thing I'm not sure is the feet joints, i.e. why are they so prominent? But that's only a minor problem. Love the flowers pattern touch on the clothes and the fierce manliness on a chest. Maybe Sieg strayed away from LF2 style with this one, achieving a more realistic rendering of proportions, but it's one hell of a good sprite and a s(h)itting, yawning and blinking guy, who seems to be dying out of boredom, although made by an also talented spriter, has nothing on it. Not a thing.

[AKA_Mathieu]

i am not trying to bring you down but this sprite is very bad

I think that was ironic, fella.

[betitngoan]

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> final?

awesome sprite !! i love love love love it
too handsome !!!
too cool !!
handsome enought to die !!!!
die !!!
look like he is talking to me
" nah~~ ! come here ,dude ! i love you "
yeHHHHHHH , I LOVE YOU !!!
oh gods !!! why are you being like this !!!
i will vote only for u
you're the best spriter .... ever !!!!!

what the problem with your sprite ??
i don't know but your sprite is down this time
if you're too busy , you don't need to join
the torso ... bad
the face ... bad
the hair ... bad
maybe you don't have more creative in the brain
it's the truth
i am not trying to bring you down but this sprite is very bad
bad bad bad.....

I cannot let this pass. With my righterous fist I will crush the dirty infidel scum that dares to insult one of the Masters.

Let me tell you this, infantilic emo of smug-festered boya, Sieg is so advanced that he can make you an eunuch with his supa spriting skills. Just look at it: the torso is excellent, - Sieg challenged himself with making a semi-combat stance and he succeeded brilliantly; the face is emotional and not the standart seriousness of one horizontal line for a mouth; the hair is licked back with hot, sticky, white... gelatin thingy... looks like Aizen's from Bleach (also, the design reminds me of one of the 13 Squad Captains, but I can't remember the name, because I dropped the series at 19x something episode). The sprite has a badarse, shiny and sharp sword, held by a firm grip, and in the other hand we have a nice touch, a sake bottle, hm, and who doesn't like sake. Yumyyy. The folds are masterfully done, it has an emotion to it, a thing, that was lacking in previous Sieg's sprites. The only thing I'm not sure is the feet joints, i.e. why are they so prominent? But that's only a minor problem. Love the flowers pattern touch on the clothes and the fierce manliness on a chest. Maybe Sieg strayed away from LF2 style with this one, achieving a more realistic rendering of proportions, but it's one hell of a good sprite and a s(h)itting, yawning and blinking guy, who seems to be dying out of boredom, although made by an also talented spriter, has nothing on it. Not a thing.

MaMaMaMaMMMM........
i don't care about SEIG , i'm talking about THIS SPRITE
seig is the good spriter but this sprite still very bad
i hate your sound
master, master ... bla bla
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i think seig know this sprite is bad

i am not trying to bring you down but this sprite is very bad

I think that was ironic, fella.

LOL , i know " that" is your sprite

[Monolith]

Betitngoan,if you don't like sieg sprites,can you stop post,how you don't like his sprites,because almost every reply is about how you don't like.Don't you think that getting boring,to read some useless post

[Siegvar]

@Betit:
You say is torso bad, face bad, hair bad... but you don't explain how its bad.

I can't see why those parts are bad.
If anything. Klod is right, the ankles are abit screwy. (Though I think I did better this time than in my other attempts.)

If you don't explain clearly... your going to get on alot of people's nerves. Its a waste of time when your criticisms more often than not are nonconstructive. You have a decent eye for art and sprites, that much I'll give you, and so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt when you say certain things in my sprite sucks, and not immediately think you're spouting nonsense out of your arse, but not everyone can see what you can. If you don't explain clearly, no one's gonna know what the fsck you're talking about, and then they -will have no choice- but to think you're full of crap.

I realise your command of English isn't quite the best around, but if that stops you from saying anything meaningful, then its about time you did something about it, or avoid posting altogether.

Now frankly, I'm usually somewhat interested in your opinion, but if you can't express it properly, I'd rather you say nothing, instead of riling up so many people around and indirectly creating clutter posts that are exercises in futility trying to figure out what the fsck you're on.

And anyone who takes klod's comments at face value needs a serious lesson in sarcasm. Though I suppose, his comments -are- a little tricky to navigate...

[LutiChris]

Yeaaa I'm glad to see betit acknowledging my entry^^
I don't think he was trying to be harsh as most of you might have anticipated
While I do agree on some aspect of the sprite, you have to admit the design is wonderfully executed with intricate detail
The only notceable flaw I could encounter was facial displacement (the only thing I would immediately notice anyways...)
Face maybe a bit too generic for my taste however I can see where u were trying to get with the personality trait...maybe some what sassy I guess
You might also want to consider toning down or even deleting the collar bone & the neck region, I see it as too muscualr for such a region...
If you do want to include then just minimize the size and tone but I would really like to see the lighter part of his neck...gone
Now as for the face you might wanna move his right-side for his features to his left, giving a dynamic feel like what you did with his pose
Basically, I would like to see only half his face looking in tht direction
Mouth/nose are a bit too close to eyes, lower it down a pixel & increase a bit of his chin just barely so to even out the rest of the face if possible
Naturally, I don't feel there is more I could spot as of right now
The rest of the body is simply amazing...

This is whut I would have done...but I'm not the miraculous siegvar
Do whatever you feel like you could improve on him

edit: lol i left my page on all night and got ninja'd by 4 people :P

edit: i think betit knows what siegvar is capable of doing and pushes hard to expect the very best of his results...imo

[Whaat]

Here's my new entry, the previous one was so horrible that i just had to make new D:

E. Edited once more xp

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Sorry Luti i changed my entry once more (made new legs), mind changing it also to the starting post?

[Ariel]

voting?

[Whaat]

I post this cuz Luti can forget to read my previous post D:
Luti change my entry before you forget D:
I changed the legs better: