[char] DNF - ReRelease

[DennisFighter_LF2]

YO! This is DennisFighter_LF2 and I'm planning the rerelease of my first character DNF. But before I do I wanted to give you guys a preview of what he's like and also to discuss updates that are coming for him.

DNF_f


DNF_0


D>J (This is outdated v1.5 will have updated version)


Screenie 1


Screenie 2


Tell me what ya think!

[Silverthorn]

I must say.... the face-pic looks very simple :P

anyways, it's good to see that there are still people out there who create original characters. Great work!
Only thing I'd complain about is that the character needs some highlights in his hair... but the rest is really cool!

[DennisFighter_LF2]

Oops Lol, Editing face pic ^^

I did shade his hair, but I do think I might redo it because on some computers the picture settings don't show the shading, but on others it does. Happens to me all the time. Kinda weird 0.o

[Guigs]

in most of the sprites he has gray hair on the forehead, which is making him look like using a brown helmetand have gray hair.

althought that its very fine

[Silverthorn]

Kayz, that face-pic looks a lot better than the previous one
Anywho, I think you could add some shading to it, especially in the hair. I like the reddish thing in there, but the rest looks pretty... flat :P
And you should redo the transition between neck/throat/whatever and clothes, it looks a but unnatural atm...

Just found something else in the spritesheet: a lot of dark dots mostly in the 5th, but also a little in the 6th line. So yea, I guess I don't need to explain what you're ought to do then....

[DennisFighter_LF2]

in most of the sprites he has gray hair on the forehead, which is making him look like using a brown helmetand have gray hair.

althought that its very fine

I used Dennis as a base and didn't get rid of the hair covering his face, but I've already made some updates and it's gone.

Kayz, that face-pic looks a lot better than the previous one
Anywho, I think you could add some shading to it, especially in the hair. I like the reddish thing in there, but the rest looks pretty... flat :P
And you should redo the transition between neck/throat/whatever and clothes, it looks a but unnatural atm...

Just found something else in the spritesheet: a lot of dark dots mostly in the 5th, but also a little in the 6th line. So yea, I guess I don't need to explain what you're ought to do then....

I see what you mean about the shading, I'm working on that atm. For the clothes, I don't know what you mean. Are you saying his neck is weird or what? And I'll have to work on "dealing" with those evil dots.

[Silverthorn]

It looks a little like the throat is really overlapping the clothes. For reality's sake, it should be beneath the clothes, but it looks a little like it is on top of them. That's what I meant with "transition"

[Hypermodder]

Yay, nice sprites, dude!
Yes, I like the whole idea! Keep it up!^^

[DennisFighter_LF2]

It looks a little like the throat is really overlapping the clothes. For reality's sake, it should be beneath the clothes, but it looks a little like it is on top of them. That's what I meant with "transition"

Oh okay, I see what you mean. I'll address that in the next update.

Yay, nice sprites, dude!
Yes, I like the whole idea! Keep it up!^^

Thanks ^^

[DennisFighter_LF2]

Little update. Seems I had to use this account since my old one for some reason was deleted :P (I had like 300 posts)

Anyways, I've been inactive for awhile for a multitude of reasons (School mostly: I'm in college and high school at the same time, plus work)

I do plan on finishing this character as he seems to be the last remaining evidence of the Official Forum Mod.

To those who remember me, HI! In addition, I plan to complete Batty and release these two at the same time.

Little problem being I lost the jump drive with all their sprites >.> So I have to redraw every...single...one...>.>

Last comment, It's great to be back