First Sprite,I guess

[Darl]

Um,after seeing some work of a friend,it just inspired me to sprite myself

Here is a single sprite I did =x.Any contribution to its improvement will be welcome.



Darl here,peace out.

[XLittlebob252]

very good for first sprite i really like it well shaded,well looking and i think this is not your first sprite.

[JossuaDC]

It's his first sprite to upload online ;P

Look at it yourself and ask yourself: 'What doesn't look right?'

When I look at your character and I ask myself that same question, I notice that the right (from our perspective) shoe is totally out of position.

Some things I've noticed:

• The shoes are too round. Look at e.g. Davis' shoes and compare them.
  
• The shading on the left (our perspective) leg is brilliant, but I don't think the T-shirt (well, the center piece inside the jacket) features any shading at all :/
  
• Arms and face don't match.
  

I like the overal look of the character though.
Great job, Darl
Keep up the good work.

[prince_freeza]

nice like the hair it like firen hair tipe. just fix the shading and u r done.

[Darl]

Thanks for all the positive feedback.

@XLittlebob252: Thanks,and,it is my first sprite. I have a friend who is an amazing spriter,and always shows me his work before and after being finished.So I just have an idea of what to do xD.

@JossuaDC: I did notice the shoes,but the shoes and the hair were the most annoying thing to do.
Related to the chest's shading,after I completed it,my friend told me he was tall,compared to the proportions of Davis and Woody,so I made the T-Shirt bigger,and moved everything down 2 pixels and I didn't make the shading after that.
About the third point...ah,I didn't understand that one xD

@prince_freeza: Thanks ^^.Yeah,I noticed too after it was done,but I really didn't want to look like that xD

[XLittlebob252]

i updated your sprite because it was to blury, what do you think of it do you like it?




if you dont like ill update it agian (XD)

[Darl]

i updated your sprite because it was to blury, what do you think of it do you like it?




if you dont like ill update it agian (XD)

Lol,I really like that hair,mine is too shiny o.o. But I don't like much the shading of the pants and the jacket xD,but then again,my shading skills aren't much to compare xD,but I'll try what you did,use only 2 colors -x-

[applejuice]

Did you save it as Jpeg? It seems so o.o .
It isnt so bad so i give it a 8 for your first sprite! Good work man!

[Silverthorn]

For a first sprite, this is a really good attempt, I'd like to see more from you!

_{yes, I couldn't resist....}

[Apocalipsis]

Post it in .bmp format xD

(What's up with all the editing? xD)