Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
my poetry
#11
(05-27-2010, 05:26 AM)Alectric Wrote:  i read through a poem by firzenX,
i wish i had a giant T-rex,

Firzenxs' poem seems to generalise,
my t-rex can shoot lasers from its eyes,

Drugs seems to be an addressed issue,
If T-rex sneezed, it would need a massive tissue

lf2timmE1 made a weird picture,
A laser shooting T-rex is an awesome creature,

Sorry for posting my poem,
For the T-Rex, little is known.

i say drugs
Reply
Thanks given by:
#12
(05-27-2010, 05:50 AM)hell fightter Wrote:  i say drugs

[Image: trexp.png]
Reply
Thanks given by: hell fightter , Bamboori
#13
hey guys wat is doing on? don go off topic . Its not abt drugs . its abt mom. ^^ is there anything wrong in my poetry?
Reply
Thanks given by:
#14
(05-27-2010, 09:28 AM)firzenx Wrote:  hey guys wat is doing on? don go off topic . Its not abt drugs . its abt mom. ^^

agreed...

Reply
Thanks given by: Alectric , LutiChris
#15
lol thats funny.and for my nxt topic?? gimme one. i gonna make one XD.
how abt lfe ?
Reply
Thanks given by:
#16
how about laser shooting t-rexes taking drugs?
Reply
Thanks given by:
#17
lol it would shoot laser on its own creator alec, if its inane.
Reply
Thanks given by:
#18
K long time no see: XD here a humorous poem i wish:

THE NOODLE RACE

Once There lived three friends
Happy as ever, playing
in the lawn.
Feud has taken place
for there were no reasons.


They set up on a task,
The Noodle Race!.
To judge the justice
started eating noodles.
Two friends as if sketched a plan..

..connected the noodles to
the other and the latter
to the other.
It formed a chain of noodle
which only one could eat.


The bully occupied the middle
gulped noodles for his sake.
The other two acted as if.
Middle man finished last


But found the trap!
Didn't want to lose his friendship
accepted his defeat
imparted them he knew the plan
Dumbstruck sat the two blokes


Roar of laughter erupted
hand-in-hand walked the friends
down in the alley way
united by hear and soul.

Correct me or make some edits i want to make it perfect for my assignment XD.
Reply
Thanks given by:
#19
instead of effin going offtopic and what not, why did nobody move this to stories? POETRY == WRITING, which is art in some case but stories are also. Erm... I kinda confused myself there. Anyways moved for the hell of it (and marshall's mum)


on a sidenote, i think our mums would get along very well, marshall :S
[sig placeholder until my new sig is finished]
should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
Reply
Thanks given by: Bamboori
#20
(11-06-2010, 04:26 PM)Phil Wrote:  instead of effin going offtopic and what not, why did nobody move this to stories? POETRY == WRITING, which is art in some case but stories are also. Erm... I kinda confused myself there. Anyways moved for the hell of it (and marshall's mum)


on a sidenote, i think our mums would get along very well, marshall :S

i thought poem is a kind of art ! -.-

Reply
Thanks given by:




Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)