Hari's scribbles

[Gespenst]

big so you could observe it better.
1st I moved upper body up by 1pixel
2nd I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and bit rotated arms
3rd. I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and then moved right arm to right side and left arm to left side by 1 pixel.

here is yours and mine



also this is just preview of you sprite but breathing needs fixed "wait" for sprites to change

[The Hari]

i would recommend using gad template at this stage

Next time, why not? But for now I want to try finish full character on my own.

1st I moved upper body up by 1pixel
2nd I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and bit rotated arms
3rd. I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and then moved right arm to right side and left arm to left side by 1 pixel.

The most common way of making this animation, but I'd actually argue is it really the same as LF characters do.

Changed it a bit, but I can't do anything more smooth in original size. Maybe will try to improve it later. I hate starting something anew, when it's already done.
btw

[Gespenst]

I actualy like what you did with walking.

[The Hari]

Lol, finally I made something.
Aaaand, already started to wonder if I really want to create him as a character. Design actually sucks, but it's still nice sprite training, so guess he'll end as a unused sheet. Better will be if I try to firstly find really good idea, then start any project.

[Akira Saito]

I think you are great spriter. I like this char. Shading is awesome. Only legs in walk are weird for me.

[Gespenst]

actualy thats lf2 style

objections?

[Gad]

for me it now looks like he's walking fast more than run.

I'd suggest this leg-movement
that's just fast edit to show what I mean, you could raise his legs more or something
similiar to freeze's one

And while jumping, dashing the character looks rather static, he almost doesn't change his arms arrangement.
Well that's just my opinion , but I think you could use it.
And what's the frame after running?
I thought it's a stop_running frame, but it looks kinda static too, so I stay in believe that it is a start of an attack.

BTW. I love how detailed u stood with the rowing frames.

[Siegvar]

Lol, finally I made something.
Aaaand, already started to wonder if I really want to create him as a character. Design actually sucks, but it's still nice sprite training, so guess he'll end as a unused sheet. Better will be if I try to firstly find really good idea, then start any project.

I don't know... the design looks good enough to me. You'll just have to figure out a nice theme for power or abilities, and he'll be definitely worth starting as a full character project. Also, sheets take so much time, you might as well make him a character anyway.

Very nice sheet, btw. Looking forward to it being complete.

[Gespenst]

I like more when legs are in this position

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than this position

[The Hari]

New (animated!) Leo and monster (animeated as well!) from his game: