Hari's scribbles

[Monolanier]

just breathing looks strange. unnatural. keep trying till you get good outcome. check lf2 sprites for it

[Ariel]

i would recommend using gad template at this stage

[YinYin]

The movements from one to the next frame are too big. Use sub pixel movements to make it look smooth.

[Monolanier]

big so you could observe it better.
1st I moved upper body up by 1pixel
2nd I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and bit rotated arms
3rd. I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and then moved right arm to right side and left arm to left side by 1 pixel.

here is yours and mine



also this is just preview of you sprite but breathing needs fixed "wait" for sprites to change

[The Hari]

i would recommend using gad template at this stage

Next time, why not? But for now I want to try finish full character on my own.

1st I moved upper body up by 1pixel
2nd I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and bit rotated arms
3rd. I moved upper body up by 1 pixel and then moved right arm to right side and left arm to left side by 1 pixel.

The most common way of making this animation, but I'd actually argue is it really the same as LF characters do.

Changed it a bit, but I can't do anything more smooth in original size. Maybe will try to improve it later. I hate starting something anew, when it's already done.
btw

[Monolanier]

I actualy like what you did with walking.

[The Hari]

Lol, finally I made something.
Aaaand, already started to wonder if I really want to create him as a character. Design actually sucks, but it's still nice sprite training, so guess he'll end as a unused sheet. Better will be if I try to firstly find really good idea, then start any project.

[Akira Saito]

I think you are great spriter. I like this char. Shading is awesome. Only legs in walk are weird for me.

[Monolanier]

actualy thats lf2 style

objections?

[Siegvar]

Lol, finally I made something.
Aaaand, already started to wonder if I really want to create him as a character. Design actually sucks, but it's still nice sprite training, so guess he'll end as a unused sheet. Better will be if I try to firstly find really good idea, then start any project.

I don't know... the design looks good enough to me. You'll just have to figure out a nice theme for power or abilities, and he'll be definitely worth starting as a full character project. Also, sheets take so much time, you might as well make him a character anyway.

Very nice sheet, btw. Looking forward to it being complete.